Crystal's Story Site
· Return to Story Index Page · Add your Comments ·

Story Comments by Readers

A-Nu-U
by C.Sprite

Latest comments are shown at top of page.


Comment by Luluk on 01/23/13
Oh My!  Thinking back on how we met the Suprunowski family.  Well, I pearonslly, with my family, the Woolliscrofts, was introduced to the Dunes Bible Camp back in 1976 or 77ish., attending camps from then on out as my parents became more and more involved, helping out with counseling, in the kitchen and maintenance around the camp.  Is that 35 years ago? WOW! (that would explain why my brain is a little  foggy  thinking back on it all     Anyway, I believe that the first time that I met Ben, he was in the belly of his mama,  IT'S A BOY !  I remember the excitement of John and Karen getting their BOY.  Danae was just a little toddler and Britt & Bethany were early elementary age.  Which is when our children, Jessalynn (Brittney's age) and Zachary (Bethany's age) first met.  As the years went on and my father had retired from Weyerhauser, my parents, Jess and Kathi were hired on  as staff  and moved to the beach, just retiring recently, after close to 20  years.   Our children grew up going to the camp every summer, just as I did, and spent time with their  Grandpa and Grandma throughout their growing up years, which is how their relationships with the Suprunowski family developed and grew.  My parents were very much involved with the Suprunowski kid's lives, attending  many of their school and sport events, cheering them on all along the way.   In fact, they called my parents Uncle Jess and Aunt Kathi growing up. The Suprunowskis family stands out to us as being very loving towards EVERYONE in our family, always warm and genuinely kind to us,  our children AND our parents throughout these many years!!!   Our children have remained friends even into their adult married years and now with children of their own.  It is incredible how fast the time goes by.  This is how we met and how we know the Suprunowski family. Our God is faithful and we are trusting Him, with you all, for Ben!!!  Love, DeWayne and Kathy

Comment by Cassie on 09/20/11
I told my kids we'd play after I found what I ndeeed. Damnit.

Comment by gj on 05/01/10
cute.
a sort of time travel,but you kept it simple and normal-good touch.

Comment by Kendra on 12/14/09
Like your other commenters I loved this story and feel it has lots of potential for further stories. The idea of being able to become the girl or woman of one's dreams is very exciting! Thanks for the story!
ps You look sooo cute!!

Comment by Jenny on 01/30/01
A nice concept and one which opens the way for many more adventures and by many different characters, etc.  Tightly written and well told, as usual, which just goes to prove what we've all been urging, crys - spend a bit more time for yourself and your own writing, it'll be time well spent and certainly well appreciated by your fans.  I'll look forward to future stories in this series, assuming there are going to be some (which I'm sure there will be.)

Comment by PRUE on 01/29/01
Wow! I love it, hope you get part two up soon lol. another great idea from our leading lady. any likelyhood of there being a glitch in the programming (a possible crosslinked file) where he experiences someone else's program. maybe they could end up stuck by being downloaded into each others bodies instead of their own lol huggles from prue

Comment by Coyote M Bishop on 01/27/01
The End?  I hope not.  Crystal has set us on to a new adventure with A-Nu-U and I am interested to where it will take us.  Another great story from our lovely hostess, what else can we expect?  This has the making of a delightful journey, good work, Crystal.

Comment by Mr Man on 01/27/01
This was the first of what I hope to be many in a series of wonderfully written tales of virtual reality. I long for the day when such a technology is available, but until then superb authors such as Crystal will do just fine. Great job on the story and thanks for writing!

Comment by Terry on 01/26/01
Another excellent story, Crystal.  The possibilities for the sequel are limitless.  Of course, you probably already know what the next journey will be like and it's only a matter of finding the time to compose it.  I'll be looking for it!

Comment by Pat Pendragon on 01/26/01
Nice story - and a neat finish with lots of potential fo the next visit. Thanks for introducing a new form of VR - let'shope someone makes it into reality soon!

Comment by Heather Sinclair on 01/26/01
Crystal,

I've gotten so used to your long stories that I got spoiled when A-Nu-U ended. WAAAAAAAA!  You have to quit addicting me to so many of your series'.

Comment by Sandra on 01/26/01
Dear Crystal

It is such a wonderful dream to "live" another life. If I could choose, well, I would do a "real life" trip just the same time I live now :).

Thank you so much, Crystal, that you give me a dream I can dream and for the wonderful time I had during reading your wonderful story.

Huggles, Crystal
Sandra

Comment by Joanne on 01/26/01
A great story Crystal as always, I was extremely surprised to see your name in the list of new stories but very delighted.  Thank you for another great tale. *smiles*

Comment by Ariel Davidson on 01/26/01
I assume that the only reason that we don't see more stories from Crystal is that she spends so much time on her website. Certainly its not due to lack of talent! This is the most promising story universe to appear on the web in a long time. If Crystal chooses to open it to other authors, they're going to find it difficult to meet the high standard that she's set with this first story.

Comment by Rose2 on 01/26/01
   Crystal you are amazing.  I do hope you make this an open universe I see lots of possibilities for more great stories like the one you wrote.I always loved the "idea" of living in the 50's, I hope the story can continue from where/when it was interupted.

Comment by Emmie Dee on 01/26/01
As busy as Crystal is being our favorite webmom and encouraging our creativity, I always enjoy it when she has time to express some of her own. She made the "A Nu Yu" universe feel authentic and interesting. It will be interesting to see where this one goes! Emmie

Comment by Paula Jutras on 01/26/01
Love to see more stories of this virtual world being done. Lots of good time periods to visit.



Add your Comments

      The importance of reader feedback cannot be overstated.   Authors rely on it to improve their future works, and it gives them the incentive to write more stories if they know that their hard work has been appreciated.  I am not saying that comments must all be lauditory.  Authors often appreciate honest, constructive criticism over simple remarks like 'Great story', although simple praise is appreciated also.  There is no limit on how much you can enter in the 'comments' box.   Sentences will automatically word wrap at the end of the line so please do not use your carriage return/enter key except at the end of your paragraphs.

      It is not necessary to use your real name here, and, email addresses are optional.  Posting your email address will allow the author to thank you for taking the time to post your comments, and/or discuss critiques and address possible concerns. 

      Be forewarned that abusive remarks and language will be removed, and the posters may be banned from this AND other areas of StorySite.



Name :
E-Mail : (Optional & Confidential)
Comments :
 
  

Please report any problems to Crystal