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A-Nu-U: Mondo Kool
by C.Sprite

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Comment by Hilder on 08/10/12
Tom, I enjoyed our cosvnreation this morning!  As  you can tell, I am probably as passionate as you about Yorba Linda  it's been a great City to live and raise our family and now, enjoy as successful business people.  The antics of our Council have been an embaressment to our Citizens and the wastefull spending have been criminal.  Although I cannot support your running mate, I understand your reasoning for joining up with John. There is plenty of blame to go around for both him and Jan Horton and at this juncture; I'd like to see nothing more than all incumbents NOT reelected.  Colleen and I will be making a small contribution to your campaign this coming week and wish you the best of luck.  I figure any candidate that will say to me  if you don't like it, lump it  might have the wherewithall to think on his own, make his own decisions and not follow the puppeteer's direction! I'm also making an assumption that you can read and understand a financial statement and count beyond ten without taking off your shoes!  A huge improvement over what we currently have for C0uncil People.   Thanks for talking with me.Sincerely,Frank Stefano

Comment by dee on 09/06/07
great story for a laugh and some poetic justice

Comment by Eric on 07/24/01
Witty and funny. Clever as all get out.

Comment by Mr Man on 02/07/01
This was another stellar effort from Crystal. This story was a goosebump inducing tale of suspense. I of course enjoyed it immensely. Good job and thanks for writing.
I don't know about anyone else, but I think Crystal's A-Nu-U series would make a heck of a good television show. Maybe someone at Scifi will pick it up.

Comment by Sandra on 02/03/01
Dear Cystal

Thank you so much for your story:) It is really great to think that ALL is possible to experience:). Your details you put in it let me shiver and when I closed my eyes I saw it all like in a dream.

Huggles, from my heart
Sandra

Comment by Paula Jutras on 02/02/01
another wonderful new story with this fantastic new universe of yours.  Like the differences between the two.

Comment by emmie dee on 02/02/01
Another enjoyable, imaginitive effort, and a cautionary tale for those who would try to hack into Crystal's site! Emmie

Comment by Joanne on 02/02/01
I really love this universe and it is so nice to see you writing and posting stories Crystal.  You really do have a natural talent for writing.  Keep up the great writing and posting. :)  I hope to read more from you soon! :)



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