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A Fantasy - Part One
by Caitlin Rose

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Comment by Julia on 01/21/13
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Comment by Jack on 08/27/11
Will be hearing any more of his adventures?

Comment by Silvia. on 05/17/11
He doesn't have a mother. What he has is a hangman!
Disgusting story.

Comment by julie j on 05/18/05
i have read parts one&two of this story they are really well written &explained  i think that after rob /rooie goes to the party dressed as a girl it will slowley become a perminant thing please write the next part soon

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/10/04
Love the hair scenes!

<<  "You little brat! I have had to deal with nasty, ungrateful men and boys all my life. You are my child. You will do as I say, groom yourself to my standards, and wear the clothes I give you. Otherwise, you will be punished."  >>

Wow, though, when mom's velvet glove comes off, her iron fist really shows.  "You, my son, will wear clothes meant for my daughter, or else!"  Sounds like mom's got a little testosterone agressiveness going; how ironic.  :-)

Comment by Jennifer Sue Aubrey on 10/19/03
Caitlin, a lovely story. I imagined myself in Robies place and just smiled. A refreshing change from some of the more harsh literature seen here. I love Mary Beth Sanford's site. How about you?

Comment by Diane Sutton on 02/28/01
Caitlin,
I'm enjoying your story about the changes to this young 8 year old boy. You seem to be somewhat stuck though in the first part of the story on the subject of having the boy do his hair. I understand there is a lot to learn about this subject and quite frankly I have myself learned something from all the writing about it from your story. I will readily read the next parts of the story as I do like it so far and recommend it for those who are looking for a beautifully written story that deserves to be listed as one of the best I have had the pleasue to read. I hope my little comment doesn't offend you as it's ment to be constructive criticism and in no way ment otherwise. I wish I had your ability to convey to the reader the things that you write.

Comment by Susan Grey on 01/03/01
  Loved your story, hope it goes on and on. It will end up one of my favorites. Thanks for sharing with us all.

Comment by JayTee on 12/31/00
Very well written.  A good story for those who like this style.  Very well written, just a little too much discipline for my liking.



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