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A Fantasy - Part Three
by Caitlin Rose

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Comment by Swidfeer on 03/08/13
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Comment by Silvia. on 05/17/11
Ridiculous!

Comment by julie j on 05/19/05
finally finished this story its very good but again i feel you could have put at least one omore episode in it well done

Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 06/12/04
<< Betty had her cheek right next to mine and was holding her fingers up in front of both of us to show me her manicure. She moved her head slightly and I could feel her hair and her bow touch my face. It felt wonderful. Before I knew what I was doing, I had my arms around Betty and I was hugging her!

Betty turned her head, kissed me on the lips, and quickly pulled away.

"I’ll get the nail stuff. Wait right here." >>

Wow!  When this girl grows up, the men don't stand a chance.

At one time I ran a Cub Scout camp and had a Betty as one of my counselors.  Most of my counselors were 16/17 year old Boy scouts.  My Betty was just out of 8th grade, about 4'5" tall and weighed about 80 pounds soaking wet.  within a day, she was running my trading post concession stand and had everyone of those big boys at her beck and call.  She ruled, and I never heard her raise her voice!  I used to kid her about being the Grand Imperial Queen of the Secret Order of the Future Wives of America.  They never called her "Miss Betty", but they would have if she'd wanted it that way.  She topped out a 5', still doesn't look like she weighs more than 100 pounds, and is now a county sherriff.

Comment by bev on 09/11/02
Top 1% of all stories I've read and wonder if you are Robbie?  I assume you are a male who had similar experiences as a pre-teen being trained in curl disclipline or are you female?  Do you have any illustrations of boys in curlers, having roller sets, showing their hair being styled in ringlet curls, etc?  

Comment by Tina on 07/24/01
Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeease write the next chapter soooon.  It is such lovely story and I am like sooooooo waiting for Robbie to continue his development as a young lady...Hope he gets over his crush on his girlfriend and starts to like boys in the future.
Tina

Comment by Tina on 06/28/01
Dear Caitlin,
   I just looove your story.  If yo take suggestions I would love to see Robbie's Mom arrange for a sleepover for the girl's club at the house so that Robbie has to get even more clothes including a bra like the other girls. To that end Robbie's mom arranges a shopping trip for Robbie and Betty.
Tina

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 01/10/01
I love this story; the hair styling descriptions are fabulous.  I can't wait for part four.  some suggestions:
1)I think Robbie should actually go to a salon, maybe be tricked into it.  OR  Have him set his Mom's hair in an original style.  A picture is taken by the womans' page reporter, or a picture is secretly entered in a styling contest by his girlfriends in the club; either way, Robie gets entered and has to duplicate the style publicly.  He does it because he doesn't want to disappoint his mom.
2) How about having Robbie introduce his club girlfriends to a traditional boy activity, like building model airplanes.
Again, GREAT story      Jezzi Belle Stewart
PS - Will Robbie age as the story goes along?

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 01/10/01
I love this story; the hair styling descriptions are fabulous.  I can't wait for part four.  some suggestions:
1)I think Robbie should actually go to a salon, maybe be tricked into it.  OR  Have him set his Mom's hair in an original style.  A picture is taken by the womans' page reporter, or a picture is secretly entered in a styling contest by his girlfriends in the club; either way, Robie gets entered and has to duplicate the style publicly.  He does it because he doesn't want to disappoint his mom.
2) How about having Robbie introduce his club girlfriends to a traditional boy activity, like building model airplanes.
Again, GREAT story      Jezzi Belle Stewart
PS - Will Robbie age as the story goes along?

Comment by Susan Grey on 01/03/01
   A really Wonderful story I wish it could go on and on forever... I agree with the other comments, this is fantastic, thanks for such a wonderful story.

Comment by Janis Elizabeth on 01/01/01
Caitlin:

I enjoyed the ongoing story of Robbie.  Reading of his permanent was a delight.  The tea party was nice.  I can't wait for the next chapter in this fantasy.  Thanks.

Comment by billiesue on 12/31/00
grate story when is no.4 comming out real soon i hope

Comment by Fiona on 12/31/00
Great story lots more on the same or simular theme please

Comment by tina browning on 12/14/00
 Yes,  We've been waiting for your continuation of this unique and senstive story.  I don't know how many others have a special obsession for the theme of young boys having their hair curled and styled, but the incredibly accurate step-by-step approach you've been providing --which I find very erotic-- during all of Robby's precious adventures are completely convincing as to his gradual submission and discovery of his own feminine attractions. I also like your sprightly, believable dialogue.

 What makes it a Fantasy, in part, is that for his girlish involvements to be acceptable among neighbors and community would be a rare phenomenon in real life.  But never mind: We want more, and to learn how he deals with school and other challenges as his dual life unfolds !!  Thanks, Caitlin, for your excellent work !!

Comment by Emmie Dee on 12/09/00
I've loved this series from the start, and it keeps getting better.Good work! Emmie

Comment by David on 12/09/00
Fantastic!
That's all I can say. Simply Fantastic!
It made me feel like I wanted to be a kid again!
Great job Caitlin, keep up the good work!

Comment by Nellie D on 12/09/00
Third part of a journey into femininity for Rob/Robert/Robbie. The first parts made the reader wonder why his mother was treating him so. That is revealed in this part. And more items are added to further the illusion of a young girl. Added to this, Betty likes him this way.

Well written with very few errors in spelling or grammar, the story flowed well as it was read.

Thank you Caitlin



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