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The Help
by A Happy Wife

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Comment by watcher on 07/03/12
No real wind up. This is really like a climatic chapter with the rest of the story missing. Actually even part of this chapter is missing.

Comment by Diana on 08/16/11
Dear Happy wife: Your stories are great I enjoy to read it, I want to tell my true storie I live in Mexico Iīm married to a wonderful wife who adores me, she is the breadwinner because I canīt work because I suffer a serious brain operation so I stay at home, Iīve been a crossdresser must of my life now Iīm 55, we used to have a maid but not any more, so ne day she suggest since I was most of the time at home I could help her doing the hosue chores, so it starts my life as maid husband, now I wear all the time panties, pantyhose, sanitary napkins, and a little make up, all this scale up, she instruct me how to use the sewing machine, so I could do my own aprons, i love embroiding crossstitch and this is the way I spend my days, serving her in all I hand wash her undies, as weel all the house chores I do the groceries shopping and the latest was to attend her friends from the office preparing a dinner and serving with my cute service short apron, tat I made and she mention it at dinner I was embarassed and īproud at the same time. Your avid reader Diana

Comment by Kelli H full time sissy maid on 04/07/11
My wife loved this story so she invited Kristen (former co-worker) over. I was working in another part of the house and when she rang the service bell, I came running to serve her, and wanted to die when I saw Kristen. After much laughter she came over to inspect my maid's outfit. I was instructed to drop my panties to expose my caged clitty. After serving them lunch and drinks I cleaned up. I was then told to get some newspaper and spread it on the floor in front of Kristin. My wife then milked me in front of our guest and I was told to lick up my droppings. My wife had never shared our arrangement before and I was totally humiliated. Kristen asked if I could clean her house, a fee was agreed to, I start next week!

Comment by "Missy," Susan Pauline on 12/27/10
Dear Ms. Happy Wife,

I just, "love," this story. I know, I've read this story a few years ago but I guess I didn't enter a comment. Mea culpa; mea culpa. I would thoroughly enjoy being, "The Hired Help." My Mistress/Wife often refers to me, as that. I'm a graduate of the Maid Academy, Class of November 2005. Since, I'm a cancer survivor, (9 years, so far)there is no sexual activity for me. I'm also the only wage-earner, so I'm in and out of that proverbial, "closet," all the time. All our neighbors know that I'm the Housemaid/husband. I'd like it to be full-time but I also have to work. On occasion, my Wife does, "rent me out," as a Cocktail Maid. (Drinks; not sex.) That's more income for Her. My pay is automaticaly deposited into Her accounts. She controls me, completely. I just wish we were wealthy enough for me to be a full-time Housemaid.

There used to be a lot of, "Bad Maid Corrective Action Tea Parties." I was also the, "entertainment." She only had one rule" nothing on the face and don't break the skin. (lashings and whippings)

I think, that I've commented on your other stories. I enjoy reading them over and over again.

Sisterly yours,

"Missy," Susan Pauline


Comment by Silvia. on 04/18/10
Oh! How can you write something like this?
Bad,bad,bad,bad,bad,bad,bad..................
Silvia.

Comment by Krystin on 07/20/09
Excellent treatment of a sissy. He needs to earn the right to use a female name I would use his full name all the time.. Maybe everytime he preformed for a guest he could earn a letter to his new name..
Elizabeth is a nice long name,

Comment by Mistress Meredith on 12/02/08
Excellent handling of a simpering sissy maid. Happy Wife, you are to be congratulated on how you've trained jim (needs a girly name) and humiliated the poor dear in front of his former employee. Keep up the good work.

Comment by bob on 06/17/08
I WOULD LOVE TO BE HER HUSBAND!

Comment by Priscilla Ann on 01/04/08
Simply scrumptious -- wonderfully humiliating little story.

Comment by slavetoby on 06/08/07
Your stories are very simply excelent.I keep coming back and reading them again, and like the other readers please keep them coming

Comment by juliej on 02/10/07
short &sweet but entertaining

Comment by Lisa on 02/21/06
Like some of your other readers would say, short and very sweet.(short does not mean bad)

Comment by julie j on 02/01/05
a good yarn its amazing jim wants to stay thaat way as a maid intresting configuration well written but short

Comment by Lori on 11/08/04
Nice little talw! I love the description of his clothes, but I liked the part especially where his ex-employee walks around him, feels his lace, lifts his little apron and checks under his skirt, while he has to stand there and take it. Love ir!

Comment by terislut on 10/18/04
just sends this little sissy all a flutter

Comment by Ron on 09/12/04
BEAUTIFUL  EROTIC  story, I enjoyed it. Keep up your great work !!!

Comment by Joan on 06/26/03
i love your storys the one about the dog,my husnand always joke about taking him for a walk so one day i said i do it,it was fun i joke around,then my friend said do it turn him into your dog he stay home you work i did it i told him i got a lic. for him and making apontment at the vet so you can get your shorts,and you can pick up some wood and build youself a nice dog house,he was mad and just laugh i look at him and said your my dog you want to be a dog your going to a dog i am sending you to dog training school,you well learn to act like one,he just look at me you went me to walk you, dont you,i told him to get down on all 4 he did i took everything he has on off,i told him dogs dont were anything,then my friend came in and just laugh he was crying,we both just laugh,today he is my dog has a nice dog house in the back of the house,i walk him at night traning school went well,they were 10 dog and mine everyone was laughing i just said my husband want to be a dog so i am making him happy, he hate beening a dog but he alway joke about beening a dog now his dream came true he even sit for me when i have supper,i took my man friend home from work with me one day i said i have to chk on my dog,he said what kind is it i said come and see,he just laugh my husband said i am no dog,i said your my dog your wereing a lic. my man friend couldent beliive it. i said you may not look like a dog but you act like one,his joke back fire on him,now he well spend the rest of his life as my dog,

Comment by Mike on 06/10/03
 You are a good story writer.
Please keep the stories coming.

Comment by mikway on 12/15/02
I would have liked to have seen the story extended wuth some details of the wifes gentlemen friends.

Comment by jorge on 11/13/02
i love all your stories, you don't need to write 10 pages that ends with a lowering of my concentration, you have that magic of writing a story short and very deep, strong and overpower to my submisive feelings. Thank you for all the good moments you made me enjoy!

Comment by Bill on 08/18/02
The humiliation was excellent and I particularly liked the idea of offering him a chance to escape AFTER he had been totally humiliated.
One stunt I would like to have seen him ordered to preform would be to hump his ex- secretary's leg like the dog he had become and lick the cum off her leg before it ran into her cowgirl boots.

Good luck

Comment by jim on 12/24/01
Dear Happy Wife;
I really enjoy your stories . Keep up the Good work.

Comment by prettysheri on 12/08/01
Love it

Comment by amanda on 10/29/01
A LOVELY STORY, VERY EROTIC, my husband wears my undies but thinks I don't know when I catch him his life will be similar to Jim's.
            thankyou

Comment by Jane on 05/07/01
 

I loved the story very good and fun to read keep it.

            LoveJane

Comment by cassandra cd on 05/03/01
Thanks, your stories give me hope some day i may experience such events!

my wife decided to leave me when she discovered my errr desires?

Is there an empty room in the basement of a "Happy Wife"

take care and please keep writing


respectfully

cassandra

Comment by Jean on 04/29/01
I caught my husband reading your stories so I have put him in a skirt and invited my friends around to see him, it was delicious watching him play with his self and when he shot his little load I made him do it on my friends boots and then lick it up.

Please keep up the stories so that we can make my sissy act them out for our amusement

Comment by raps5s on 04/21/01
Very nice, short but fun,  I enjoyed it.  Keep up the work.

Comment by ti ne 1 on 04/12/01
Brief but wonderful stories that cut to the heart.thankyou

Comment by harriett-cd   herman on 04/12/01
loved all of your stories. I wish the man in the stories was me, I will have to have my wife read them. Keep writting more, they are really enjoyable.  Harriett-cd from north california

Comment by Supey on 04/10/01
Your stories are short but great.  What about one who works for her husband's business, forces him to turn it over to her and then she makes him her secretary or receptionist?



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