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Louis's Mistake
by Margaret Jeanette

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Comment by Mamtha on 08/17/18
I liked all other stories of this author which had a happy ending. But this is unacceptable.

Comment by MAID ANGELA on 11/30/17
As a published author my opinion is while this a well thought out story and well written it is too long and would benefit by being edited to about two thirds of it's current length. This would sharpen it up and if correctly edited would lose none of it's interest

Comment by jjconn on 07/28/17
i quit reading when she made him clean the bathroom of hair!! i would have changed clothes packed a bag,cleaned cash accts. & headed for a divorce lawyer,it's not illegal to masterbate but what torture & spousal abuse she's doing is!!!!

Comment by Ron Simons on 04/11/14
I just finished reading 'Louis's Mistake'. I loved the story although I would have like to have seen Louis put up move of a fight for his manhood.  The ending was great. I love that they married twins.  I think Tracy has tasted control and power and she loves it.  Can Ron's future be in panties? I am pretty sure it is.  

Comment by this is me on 08/05/12
I like happy endings but I don't like this ending. It is too much work to suspend my doubt about how this ending would take place. It bugs me the wife's apology is enough? She did some real mean vindictive things to him, contemptable things, criminal things. If forgiveness means being her friend it would never happen. It is too bad to because the two gentleman brothers angle was one I could really buy into.

The boss! That bitch talking about how much she liked him! Give me a break! She delved into his personal life a place no boss should ever go. She positioned him three times below his wife through actions she took. No, I don't believe this ending.


Comment by Helena on 07/10/10
You are truly talented. This was an excellent story and your best work.

Comment by Silvia    (from Brazil) on 10/23/09
I'm really sorry for your story. This story is very, very bad. I think that Tracy don't deserve forgiveness for what she made with Louis.
Tracy is evil and she doesn't deserve to be happy.
She was not needing to have done the evil that she did to Louis. She might have asked divorce,if she did not want to keep any more him, and not to do the cruelties that she did with him!
I'm really sorry for this story.
Silvia.

Comment by julie j on 09/12/04
I thought the story was great it showed how tracy controlled her husband with one lapse playing with her slip what a way to go i would have liked to have been louis it would be good to make another part to this well done&well written



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