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Marcy's Wish
by Conrad Lee

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Comment by Dianna on 03/20/08
What exactly, did Shelly do wrong? What did either Jason or Shelly do wrong? So he broke up with you. Boo hoo Princess, deal with it like an adult, not a spoiled brat.

You have good writing skills sugar, but your characters and character motivations leave a lot to be desired.


Comment by Jezzi Stewart on 09/18/05
So that's it?  Shelly, who, as far as we know had really done nothing wrong, is murdered and the bad girl wins?  



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