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Comment by mia pron khalifa on 12/20/18
XEKe1E The Birch of the Shadow I believe there may become a couple of duplicates, but an exceedingly handy listing! I have tweeted this. A lot of thanks for sharing! Comment by Keisha on 12/13/11 It's good to see someone thnkiing it through. Comment by Sydney Michelle on 12/06/01 Although very competent grammatically, the hook for this story is so far down that it is hard to determine whether to continue. Comment by Paula Jutras on 12/06/01 Interesting how the box opened on it own and how even the most infertile women can become pregnant in your story. Glad it wasn't much longer than it was since I don't normally read stories marked over 100k. Even being over 70 like yours is pushing it since I prefer to read like I write - short tales. Unless the summary really catch my interest. Good work here. |
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