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Comment by jennyq on 05/02/13
just read texas girl again.found chapters 51/52/53 on big closet was wondering if any new chapters were coming and where to look for them coming very soon I hope love jennyq

Comment by Ernie on 03/11/13
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Comment by Ernie on 12/19/12
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Comment by Ernie on 12/17/12
Crystal Texas Gal,I Can,t Go Home Like This and How I Spent My Summer Vacation all need a 2rd book. DD needs a 2rd Small Twin engen plane for the ranch. We just need more of Crystal and Ashly as legal trouble in Massachusetts. Ernie

Comment by Ernie on 12/03/12
I have read your three major stories as I fallowed our three girls(Darla Ann,Crystal,and Ashley)with interest. I like the way you leave the story hanging. Thank you and I look forward too more chapters. Ernie

Comment by Rone Welles on 12/01/12
Still one of the best ever wirtten ... We love you and your work for us is realy appreacheated... Thank you for your time and effort ... OX XO Rone

Comment by Paula on 10/18/12
Hiya Crystal, hope your well and your fingers are typing the next enthralling chapters of DD, must say I'm getting withdrawal symptoms waiting for the next instalment, please let us know when and were to find it when it's posted, your crystal site give a place to view updates on a mirror server gut it get me know where. Can you at least let me know how to get there because its been a long time since I've read any new updates or new posts.
Thanks for reading my drivel, but I do miss these stories.

Lots of love
Paua


Comment by Paula on 10/05/12
The story line is gripping, love the adventure of Darla Ann can't wait till chapter 54 ,55'56 ect ect comes our please let e know when they a put on and where to find then

Comment by Maggie on 09/13/12
What can I say, I thought I was reading a story about a young guy who should have been a girl, but the truth is ths story should be made into a book and a film, the whole story line is fantastic. I spent all day reading this today and like a world class novel, I couldn't put it down.... It is a fantastic and lovely story, you the writer, deserve to be recognised for this, my recommendations??? Turn it into a novel and it will probably become a best seller and a film... thank you for your writings, you should be proud of yourself. Maggie

Comment by Dee Dee on 08/01/12
Know I'm getting slow in my old age, but the thought just occured to me as I once again do a re-read - How much is DD taking home from her position at Piermont? Can't even begin to imagine the tax nightmare such a situation could entail! thanx!

Comment by Abby on 03/20/12
Reading Texas gal with "In a gadda da vida" playing in the background to 'feel' the 60s era. Bye the way, those of you who are seeking chapters 51, 52, and 53 (these cover the Brandon fire events) you can find them at "The Big Closet" site. Just do a search for 'Texas gal' and voila.

Comment by Dee Dee on 03/10/12
Hi Crystal, Love this story, I have read, re-read and re-re-read and will probably read it many more times before I cash it in. Your descriptions of everyday life in the sixties is refreshing and accurate, really a great nostalgia trip. The detail you've included in describing the hillsboro, waco, college station, austin and dallas area is great. I live between gatesville and temple so the areas you reference are quite familiar. Throughout the story I found only 1 and ONLY 1 discrepency, there is only 1 hour between NJ and TX not 2, not a biggie but the way education is going the folks back east might conclude that central texas is further 'waaay out west' than it actually is! That aside, you write a wonderful story, and I wish you all the best! Knowing how Real LIfe is, we don't always get or get to do what we wish, but continuance or conclusion of TG Would be wonderful! I understand how storylines get sidetracked and deadended, I have one 'in progress' for several years, don't know if I'll ever get around to continuing, let alone finishing the thing or not. Just know there are many out here who appreciate your efforts and wish you well. Thanks Dee Dee

Comment by Sailor Chaos on 03/09/12
Both me and my friend love your story and we hope two things
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&
2: As there a Misc. section that you will republish this story at Fanfiction.net

Comment by rone welles on 02/15/12
Some of us are still waiting for the finnish .... We can only wish YOU well and send our love ...XO XO Rone

Comment by Bob on 01/27/12
Chapters 51, 52, and 53 appeared here, but disappeared when the board crashed. This board never got fully functioning again. The three chapters were posted on Big Closet after a long wait. They leave the reader hanging in a different place.

Comment by Lew on 01/24/12
love the story. it ashame that chapter 51 has never appeared and the story is left ahnging in the wind.

Comment by stuart on 10/30/11
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Comment by Krystalyn on 09/19/11
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Comment by Richard on 06/05/11
Crystal; Over the past 3 or 4 years I have read this story several times and have watch the last three chapters 48; 49; & 50 change almost every time I have read them. I also going thru comments that people have said they have read thru to chapter 53, where is 51 to 53 hidden at as I have never seen them? Also wondering if when DD turns 18 is she going to complete Her SRS to become the girl She is and is there anymore to Her and Owen in the future?

Comment by jenny on 05/30/11
could you add the extra chapters to your stories on this site as you shut down site two.should have taken stories from combating authors off site tillthey madeup notmake everyone suffer.please consider adding extra chapters at least. thanks jenny

Comment by robbie on 04/05/11
Absolutely LOVE the story,
I am looking for episodes 51 to 53, but I cant find them anywhere. Please...Please add them to the site again

Robbie


Comment by Bobbie on 04/01/11
Several have mentiond a lull in your writing I am not sure of the dates butI recall at least one and possibly two chapters one was the trip to the Riveriara broken up by fire at Brandon. and possibly the
next or same chapter rebuilding corprate Hdq. nearer center of country.

Seems I also recall some complaints on the part of some regarding the
including stories with pesons of a young age requesting withdrawing and removal of their works. This has undoubtedly caused some delay in
updating future chapters. Those chapters seem to be missing here and
story sight one also. Can they possible be found and included?

This old Texan would really appreciate if you could add a few more of
your wonderful chapters before he reaches that point where I am not sure they will be available from the other side.

Days are fleeting by Please! Pretty Please More.

Bobbie


Comment by Briar on 03/21/11
Dear Crystal,

I seem to remember another chapter or two after those now showing on your original or surviving website. Where the HQ had a fire and the records get destroyed?

I wonder if it would be possible for you to put these lst parts back up on here? I am sure you must have a copy somewhere.

I was reading the wehole Texas Gal story again, for a THIRD time, and still being enthralled by the many aspects of it, that makes it worth reading more than once.

Thank you for creating this marvelous story, and for this marvelous site too. We can never repay you for all your years of effort, and your generosity in letting us all access it for free.

Bless you,

Briar


Comment by PatJ on 03/16/11
It's been three years since you've added any chapters.

Please, Please, Please continue the story.


Comment by Chuck on 03/11/11
Found the site just last week, really enjoyed all 50 chapters of Texas Gal. Got to the end of chapter 50 and read: "To be continued..." am wondering when that will be. With the last entry made in March of '08 will there be any more? I really hope so. Can't wait to read more. I saw references to an additional 3 chapters, but they are not on any site I can find. Please add them and any more that might be available!

Comment by Jaime Starr on 02/03/11
How are people reading Chapter 53? It only goes up to 50!

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Comment by Jamie Erickson on 01/08/11
Kudos, By far the best and most detailed story here. Please do continue the story because I can't wait to see hoe the saga continues.

Comment by Anita on 01/08/11
Crystal, you are such a tease. I have read (and re-read) this story a couple times. I love it. And when I get to the 50th chapter and see that it is continued in the 51st chapter, I always am left to wonder whether you finished it but didn't post it? or whether you started to finish but stopped in mid stream.

I join the masses (the others before me who have left comments), and I wish to see the continuation and the conclusion to the story. You're a marvelous writer and the story just grabs me.


Comment by Grumpy on 12/19/10
Please give us more Darla you can't leave us in suspense for much longer. It would be good to know if she gets her little secret taken care of and wins her battle with Alliance we really need to know if she finds out who the spy is in her company.

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rear story before what happened to next 3 chapters they were posted before.

Comment by Peter on 11/14/10
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Comment by Claire on 10/30/10
I really enjoy this story and have read it more than once, I really do hope you will continue this soon as it would be a terrible shame not to see it to completion.

Comment by Richard on 10/24/10
Crystal; I think I have read this story completly now in the last year at least 4 times and hoping your ready or have the time to give us more; more; more; and more!!!

Comment by Kaitlynn Hansen on 10/15/10
i just finished the 53rd chapter and have enjoyed the whole thing and can't wait for more

Comment by Steve on 10/13/10
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Comment by Gary Winters on 08/13/10
I am hoping to read more of Texas gal. If you finish it I hope you will consider selling the full story as an e-book, maybe some place like Lenora's cave? I'm a published journalist and avid reader (1 -2 books per day) and I think you are one the top writers I've read. It is easy to empathize with your characters which is what makes you a great writer. I've read each of your serials (Texas Girl, I can't go home like this, and what I did last summer) at least 3 or 4 times.

Please don't make us wait years for more.

Gary


Comment by Jeanine D'Arville on 07/17/10
Crystal, not only is this an extraodinary story, it keeps on getting better after each reading.... PLEASE CONTINUE with the storie. Thank you

Comment by Owd Bob on 04/19/10
Crystals system generally does not allow the posting of URLs, so try this: go to the home page, then click on the 'Stories' link at the TOP of the page. Then go to the A-C page, and find 'Crystal (C. Sprite)' at the bottom of THAT page. This should take you to Crystal's story page on the storysitetwo server, which has the new story chapters.

Comment by jennyq on 04/17/10
hello again just was wondering how to get to read chapters51-53 or any additional chapters written lately as they aren't listed on the storyboard. would greatly appreciate any info you could give in this matter. also any updatew to your other stories would be great also. hope everything else is good with you,thanks for your previous reply. luv ya jenny

Comment by Gloria Wells on 03/17/10
Are you going to post any more of the story here? I have enjoyed the story very much, I just hate to see it left hanging.

Comment by Bob on 03/05/10
Charles Whitman did the shooting from the Texas Tower on August 1, 1966.

Comment by Janice Lynn on 02/28/10
Crystal, as I was re-reading your marvelous story of Darla Anne and her adventures, I was wondering if she and Judy were attending UT-Austin during the time the deadly shootings took place? As I recall, they were either in 1967-68-69 period of time. You have never mentioned this issue in the story, so I just thought I would ask, as it does seem it would deeply impact their lives as it did so many others. I am also curious as to your continuing the story with some new chapters any time soon. Hugs, Janice

Comment by robertfiala82@gmail.com on 02/17/10
Dear crystal I have to say I loved your stories ive read most of them twice. I expect if I new your real name I could find published copys of your non transgendered work at the public library. Ive read thousands of books and yours are some of my favorites. Recently I noticed new Texas girl chapters and decided to read through it again before I got to the new chapters but by the time I got to chapter 48 they had dissapeared can you please post them again. Love Robert.

Comment by Steffany on 02/16/10
This is an amazing story. I just recently found the site and can't get enough of Crystals stories. The are just so incredable. I HOPE and can't wait to read the next 50 chapters. Thank you so much, Steffany

Comment by Owd Bob on 01/07/10
Lauren, if you'd posted on cyberboard, you'd have gotten a quicker answer. Try using the storysitetwo URL to find any recent stories.

Comment by lauren on 01/01/10
Why is 051,052, and 053 avabble on my IPhone but not on my desk top?

Comment by Susana on 12/29/09
I just recently started (and finished) reading TEXAS and I CAN'T GO HOME. And for someone who reads as slowly as I do in order to savor recreational material, that's saying something. Both stories are gripping and make the reader really 'get into' the part of the narrators. Crystal writes with so much detail, depth and accuracy that you really are listening to someone with first hand knowledge in the subject described. Whether it is forestry, pulp&paper, engineering, corporate interrelationships, corporate buying&selling, private/corporate flying, theater,television&movie industries and even real estate and specific details of geographic locations, she is always spot on! I look forward to future episodes of ANYTHING Crystal writes. I have the feeling she could make the packing list for a Toro lawnmower spellbinding.

Comment by George on 11/24/09
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Comment by joanne 206 on 11/08/09
Opps, forgot to ask : Are there plans to post any more this year.

Comment by joanne 206 on 11/03/09
I hope that you will keep writing on the story, and do another posting soon.

Comment by donnacheer11 on 10/23/09
Please don't keep me on ice. I've been waiting for you to write another chapter or two about Texas Gal. The story is really getting gripping. I also can't wait to see if Darla gets a love life. Please let it be a girl. I'd also like to see more of Darla the Corperate VP of E&S. She wears two hats but most of the time only uses one. I'd like to see her put in an appearance at the Portland offices. Don't let my wishes deter you this is a great story.

Comment by maya naize on 10/11/09
Magnificent saga. That being said, my fondest wish is that all authors would refrain from posting chapters until a story is complete. I would gladly wait weeks for a subsequent chapter if I was assured up front that the final chapter was already written and ready to be posted. I have checked in daily hoping to see the next chapter of Texas Gal. So far, to no avail. For now, however, I give up. Maybe I'll check back in a year, or two, or three, or ...

Comment by Leo on 10/01/09
Thank you for the additional chapters that you slipped in while I was not looking. Love Darla and I hope the muse will let you continue the story.

Comment by Bob on 09/16/09
PLEASE, KEEP GOING! Give us more oof Darla.

Comment by Dennis on 09/14/09
You're killing us with the prolonged suspense! This story has turned us all into Crystal junkies!

Comment by Jackie Dixon on 09/07/09
Well I just finished all 53 chapters, and I am anxiously waiting for the next one. I have enjoyed the story and can not keep from reading it. It has captivated me from the very first and has held my interest throughout. Each chapter ends making you want more, just gotta have more I cain't stop. Oh well, as I said before, when I had read the first 17 chapters, you have a skill at writing, I still rank you as one of the best I have had the pleasure of reading.
Thank you Crystal.

Comment by Janice Lynn Miller on 09/03/09
Crystal, I have a habit of checking your stories about once a day and was thrilled when I discovered three new chapters to "Texas Gal". I love this story and its so very interesting real life characters. Thank you so very much. Janice Lynn

Comment by Scramble_J on 08/31/09
Like so many other fans of this series I tend to go back from time to time to re-read this ever growing epic and look forward to each new chapter when it pops up. These last three showed up just a week after I finished my latest re-read. I like the drama that is unfolding with the fire, relocation and Grandma seeing DD's style of how she does things. Was kind of sad to not see a letter from that writer that is always interviewing or touting DD's name in the series. But then I'm betting you got one plan for up and coming chapters.

Judy's little drunken fun was a hoot to read. As the girls all mature I'm sure we will see other examples of things like this, different with each girl.

Thanks again for an amazing couple of chapters and I look forward to many, many more wonderful chapters.

-J-


Comment by Susan Heywood on 08/30/09
Hi Crystal,

Thanks for the heads-up about part 53. I agree with Woody; this story deserves major congratulations for your tenacity in keeping it going and keeping us entertained. Thank you.

Susie


Comment by Woody on 08/29/09
Wow, just looked at the whole chapter list. Hadn't realized before that this story has been in progress for 10 years. This has to be one of the longest running still active serials around. Thanks for an amazing tale Crystal.

Comment by Heather on 08/29/09
I have been captivated by this wonderful story since i read my first chapter so many yaears ago. While refenances to DD's reason for being on this site have been minimized as she has such a greater focus, the depth of the stories have transended the need for futher embellishment. I should be interesting as DD matures and eventualy has time to pay attention to her natural passions.

I have several times gone back and re-read the story hoping for new chapters and then poof they appear to bring a smile to my reading enjoyment. Are we ever going to find out how deep the deceptions went with the Texas Ranger investigation? Has South Core learned their lesson or is it now Alliances turn to be the vilian? Will Grandma change her way of doing business? Always some surprises can be found in this wonderful story and I can hardly wait for future chapters. It is wonderfull at this time where all we see are companies only out for profit that DD is so compassionate and considerate while making inroads into big business in such a mature sensitive manner.


Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 08/26/09
Another fine chapter to a very wonderful story. I loved reading this years ago, and I love it still. It is nice to see DD back in action.

Love & hugs,
Barbara


Comment by Bob on 08/26/09
Clothes go on a hanger. Airplanes go in a hangar. I did not realize this until recently when I was reading an aviation magazine.

Comment by Ed Brown on 08/26/09
Well I have read Chapter 53 and as usual you have stimulated the desire for more. I have to assume that is part of your stock in trade. My desires to read more of Texas Gal and I Can't Go Home must be realisticly tempered with the fact that your plate is quite full. I can dream can't I? . I am sure that when it is possible you will write some more. Thank you for all your efforts. I am sure those two little words which mean so muchare not said enough. So thank you,thank you and thank you. Be sure to take good care of yourself. Have a happy and rewarding remainder of the year. Ed Brown

Comment by Zomba on 08/25/09
I went back and read the entire story again from chapter one. All I can say is that it is a fantastic read, and all I can hope is that we haven't heard the last of DD and her empire.

Comment by KEITH HARTMAN on 08/25/09
Thank you so much for this story! I was enthralled! I missed Darla's "coming of age" sexuality; but loved the corporate lore. I've been an IBM exec in the past; also been a psychiatrist. All you wrote seemed true to the core. Thanks again!

Comment by ragtop on 08/25/09
Crystal,really appreciate that you have had the time to add some more chapters. Texas Gal is extremely enjoyable reading.

Thanks again,

Ragtop


Comment by Beth on 08/25/09
What happened? Chapters 51-53 have gone away. Glad I read them this AM.

Comment by Woody on 08/24/09
Whew, a third new chapter in Texas Gal. Love it although we're still left wondering about what happened with the plant. Get those private detectives working on this too. Sounds like they need a mole at Alliance along with the one at South Core. Hoping a few more of the core team decide to move or there could be more disruption to DD's company and certainly to acquisition efforts. Wonder if we'll see one of her competitors make a major move sometime soon. Of course this could all be wrong and it was caused by a singel disgruntled ex employee. Great work Crystal and thanks!

Comment by Bill Troutman on 08/24/09
Aloha Crystal, I love your Texas Gal story, have reread in several times, and was always hoping you would keep going, what a great surprise to read your last two chapters, what a great gift you have giving to your readers, thank you, mahalo. I have learned in life not to ask for much, you may not be sure of what you really receive, but please keep this story going and going and going, it's so great.
much mahalo : ) bill

Comment by Kelly on 08/22/09
I just wanted to compliment you on such a great story. I hated to leave the story while I read each chapter. You should definitely try to publish it. I can't wait to see it continued. Please let my know when you add new chapters, as I will greatly appreciate it. This story has kept me captivated from beginning to present, and I'm sure you'll keep up the great writing. Thank you again and like I said I'll be looking for more.

Kelly


Comment by Jenny Q on 08/22/09
just saw you posted 2 new chapters. it's been awhile sense i read the story so i took the time this afternoon to reread the whole story.please don't make us wait to long for more.love the plot.thanks again for agreat story.

Comment by Jackie D on 08/21/09
I have only read the first 17 chapters, and I just cain't wait to get to the end. I am captivated with the story line and the characters. It is the best novel I have read in years, and I would rank your writing skills with those of Daniel Steele, (who is my favorite author.) I have a real hard time putting the book down, or rather turning the computer off. I truely love it, and I can't wait to read it all.
I would suggest that you try to get it published, I think it would sell as a regular book.
please keep writing, and thank you for a wonderful story.

Comment by Bobbie on 08/18/09
I have followed Texas Gal from early on. I despaired of you ever taking up the story again. I am so pleased that you provided two more chapters. Please don't stop until you come to some kind of logical end. Darla Ann is such an exciting character to follow, keep us your faithful fans involved in her life.

Sweet kisses for a sweet lady!


Comment by Angel O'Hare on 08/18/09
What a great birthday present from one of my favorite of favorite authors!

Thank You Crystal for this wonderful birthday present!

As always you leave me gasping and desiring for more!

You've also inspired me to continue with a story series I have left long overdue for additional chapters.

Thank you again Crystal!
Huggles
Angel


Comment by Noel Lexicon on 08/18/09
You are one of my all time favorites Crystal. What a great story twist!

Like many of your other adoring fans I have read Texas Gal a number of times and wait (im)patiently for each new addition.

Sure hope your muse and desire to write never runs dry.


Comment by BrendaK on 08/17/09
THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!

I know how 'real-life' can tie us up and certainly move us in different directions and even stop us from going down certain paths.

I'm very happy that you've been able to pick up on this story again.

hugs
Brenda


Comment by Mickey D on 08/17/09
Great dialogue, pace, and detail.

Comment by Jeanie on 08/16/09
Thank you for giving us more to the story. It is one of my favorites

Comment by Catherine Robertson on 08/16/09
I have only read the first 5 chapters of your "book". Any and all other authers should dream of getting even close to your story telling skills!. Thank you.
cheers,
Catherine

Comment by David on 08/16/09
Excellent as always ... my money is on a conspiracy. Alliance pulling South Core's strings. Disgruntled employees or ex-employees would leave lot's of evidence. Alliance is concerned that Piermont is a threat. By feeding South Core's hatred, they "encouraged" action. Now we will see again if the spy at South Core proves as valuable as he/she has been in the past. I pity those responsible, Darla will win out in the end.

Comment by woody on 08/16/09
Just realized that there were two new chapters. (don't remind me of how many people said that in their comments)

You sure have build a lot of wisdom into that young woman. There is of course her negotiating skills; we've admired that part for years. The thing I saw here was a completely business-like analysis of the situation after the fire while not loosing track of the effect on the employees. (although I thought 2.5 days pretty short to make life altering decisions) There is wisdom and compassion showing in the girl. Your section where Grandma compliments her on her management style was good too. Trying to picture the scene - two very successful business women discussing the way they manager their companies. The two generation age difference is no issue and although Grandma is her mentor, she recognizes that Darla has a different but very effective style.

Thanks again for the great job

Comment by sara on 08/16/09
I have said it before and I'll say it again I love this story another great chapter. I love it if I had to I would pay to read it

Comment by Ed Brown on 08/15/09
It was great to read chapters 51 & 52 of Texas Gal. I cannot judge an autors writing ability. As just a reader I can say that for my money you arre doing just great. I love these stories that you write. I think you do it very well,very well indeed. I can't for the life of me figure out where you get the time. I wish that you could end these stories to your satisfaction. Until then I await each bit in great antisipation. With what you have on your plate, I can only wish you the best. Yout devoted fan, Ed Brown

Comment by Starbuck on 08/15/09
Bravo and 'erk!'

Uh, that crystal ball you accused me of having earlier did /not/ include this! Well played. I cannot wait for more.

I also agree that this should be a textbook for entrepreneurs. Considering that I'm taking Business Admin courses currently and how reading parts of this has helped me to connect the dots in understanding corporate accounting and other management practices.

I only hope, when done, that I'm half the manager DD is.


Comment by Philip Jacobs on 08/15/09
I have always enjoyed reading your stories, and it was most gratifying to see that you have added two more chapters to one of my favorite works on your site. The quality is exemplary, as usual, and extends the storyline in a way that just keeps on drawing me in. I'd love to see more chapters quickly, but I'm perfectly willing to wait as long as it takes for quality work. Thanks for gracing us with new chapters, and I hope your Muse continues to feel frisky, and that your time allows for more chapters soon.

Comment by Susan Heywood on 08/15/09
I really love your stories, and am delighted to see the latest two chapters of 'Texas Gal'. I know that I have never commented before, which is somewhat remiss of me, but I wanted to let you know how much I appreciate your efforts.

With kind regards,

Susie


Comment by Frieda on 08/15/09
Not just one but two new chapters. Fantastic. And fully up to the usual high standard - or even beating it.

I love the background - as I come originally from the town where the Fourdrinier brothers built their industry-enabling machine, and which until recently still boasted two paper-making plants, it has a special resonance for me.


Comment by Woody on 08/15/09
This is truely one of my favorite stories on the net and I'm overjoyed to see it continue. Of course the cliffhanger at the end of this chapter is a little more serious than the others have been so I'm certainly looking for what comes next but Darla has proven to be resourceful and has a large set of good friends and supporters along with very loyal employees. I suspect she can make it through a setback.

One thing that's never come up in the book (I don't think) is Darla's income. I assume that someone pays her quite well for her work along with some share of ownership in the company. Hoping Grandma is taking good care of her protege. Darla seems to live for the rush in doing her job rather than her income. A healthy situation now but sometime that has to change.

Thanks Crystal for another chapter that I read greedily and that just leaves me wanting more.


Comment by Briar on 08/15/09
Crystal,

what a lovely surprise! TWO NEW Chapters of Texas Gal, the second one an absolute stinger!

I am so grateful to you for continuing this Epic, particularly when you have been so busy with the Story Site reconstruction work.

A fire in a business is something that all companies dread, as nothing can ever be the same afterwards. How you have our DD tackle the problems that arise from it is not only best example of how to do it, but also maintains the excitement that runs through all this long tale. This story ought to be published in book form and serve as a textbook for entrepreneurs IMHO. Thank you Crystal, for doing this. may you be truly blessed.

Briar


Comment by Janice Lynn on 08/14/09
Crystal, I was very happy to see the new chapter of this wonderful story. Why am I getting the idea that the fire is going to be found to be arson? Along with this, the computer system being used by Darla's companies (all hooked together), by era of the story, should be a main frame system. It could be possible for that system to survive the fire, as the room the frame units would normally be located in, whould be a fireproof room and should normally require a "Haylon" system to be installed to quash any fires that came into it or started there. "Haylon" is a gas that takes the oxygen out of the room. We used it extensively in the Air Force for our main frames. Once that system began operation, NO-ONE was allowed into the main frame room without special breathing apparatus. We also used it alot with many of our specialized electronics.

Comment by SuZie on 08/14/09
I am SO glad you've returned to this story! Thank you so much!

Looking forward to the next chapter...


Comment by Nicole on 08/14/09
Crystal,
Thanks for another great chapter, I can't wait to see how the
cliffhanger is resolved.

Nicole


Comment by Suna on 08/14/09
nice to see a change in events, looking toward how the situation is resolved

and

still waiting for some sort of change to darla's physical status and some personal contact with perhaps a boy but just now i can't see her bantering with anyone near her own age she has pretty much skipped to her late 20's


Comment by Beth on 08/14/09
Thank you for the next chapter. Please add more.

Comment by Lynn on 08/13/09
Crystal, Thanks for the chapter. Darla Ann is my heroine.
Lynn

Comment by sara on 08/13/09
you dont know how happy i am to see tne new chapter of Texas Gal i love the story i cant wait till the next thank you so much for the wonderful story

Comment by John Woodbridge on 08/13/09
It is great to have another chapter of texas Gal.I have enjoyed all your stoties. I have read each story at least 4 times.I have stayed up to 3 in the morning many times.I hope we have more chapters coming soon, I am looking forward to it. Thanks John

Comment by Brian on 08/13/09
Great to see another chapter in The Texas Gal saga. What a cliffhanger you have left us with this time!!! Please keep up the great writing...... your other stories are great too, wish you could continue them as well. No matter what, rest assured your writings are enjoyed by all who read them.

Thank you again for allowing us to enjoy your talent of creating realistic three dimensional characters and interesting lives that they live.


Comment by Rose on 08/13/09
Hi Crystal,
What a wonderful surprise to find a new chapter in the wonderful series of Texas Gal.
Please do continue so that we can enjoy seeing Darla rebuilding her empire.
Look forward to the next chapter.
Luv Rose

Comment by Daria on 08/13/09
Sooo happy to see this story continue! Thanks Crystal

Comment by joanne206 on 08/13/09
I was happy to see that you have not abandoned the TEXAS GAL story and I'm hoping that a new POSTING will not be long into the future. How is DD going to resolve her dilemma or had most of the records stored on the computer removable tape drives in a fireproof area.

Comment by Celso on 08/13/09
dear Cristal, thanks for this wonderful story.

Comment by Peta on 07/11/09
Texas Gal is a great story line. It is unfortunate that it seems to have been abandoned.

Comment by Seamas Barry on 04/28/09
Dear Crystal,
One of the best stories I have ever read and I've read obsessively all my life. I teach creative writing and am a qualified copyeditor and proofreader, so you can imagine that I've truly seen it all.

Texas Gal is a fantastic tale, epic. I hope that DD takes over South Core and Alliance. I would see her sisters taking over the other Amerimoore divisions, with Grandma making DD owner of Piermont and CEO of Amerimoore

Please, please, please post the remainder of this fantastic tale, as soon as possible. Your loyal fans are slavering at the bit to read the conclusion to it.

I can see DD's mother helping her sister to run the oil business and possibly remarrying, the same for Auntie, to two loving men.


Comment by joanne206 on 03/27/09
Hope to read more postings in the near future. This story is one fine piece of work.

Comment by Bruce on 03/17/09
great but i intend to track u down and tickle u into submitting the rest of the story, or will take a bribe??

Comment by TZ on 02/11/09
I've enjoyed Texas Gal very much and I surely hope that you continue to write the story to its glorious conclusion. (Hopefully when DD reaches 100 years old).

Comment by Dawn Mackenzie on 02/07/09
Crystal -

Thank you very much for the Texas Gal sequence. I enjoyed many a late night of reading to watch the development.

Please continue!

- Dawn


Comment by SuZie on 01/11/09
Crystal:

Very impressive. I have never worked at the levels of management that you write about, but everything seems totally believable. Personnel management, business aquisition, even the fact that many of the most successful businessmen and women are deeply intuitive as well as intelligent...all of it seems to come together in your story.

Then there is the in-depth knowledge that you display. Either you know the fields you write about through extensive experience, or you have done an incredible amount of research.

DD is a dynamo of hard work and determination who puts most of us to shame. I can tell from the writing that you must share many of her attributes.

Sincerely,

SuZie


Comment by Alexis DeVille on 01/03/09
Re" Texas Gal
WOW! This is one of if not the best Serial TS store I have had pleasure to read! The towns, the airplanes,the story line!
As a TS woman that went Full time in 1998 over a year before I had planned to because MY boobs got too big too fast and I could no longer hide them. My transition did not go as well as her's (Darla Anne's) I got fired, literally black balled in field I worked in, I got disinherited. I went back to school and got a second degree in IT MIS and work now in a related field of Robotic and remote sensing.
Any way, I found the story very close to my heart also I am from Vermont and remembered Brandon, Rutland and other places in New England. I also am a Pilot, I like Darla I found that I saved so much time in travel as field Engineer. I ended up with Commercial Multi Inst with type ratings, with over 1200 hours in turbines and another 2300+ in pistons. MU-2,PIPER CHEYENNE 400, King Air 90, 100 and 200,Lear 20 and 50 series, in piston single engine Piper Cherokee, Arrow, Cessna 150, 172, 182, 206, and in P206 and Multi in Aztec, 300 series and the 400 series, Beach V tail and Debonaire queen air and H-18S trigear.
Sadly the FAA felt that I was not " Pilot material " during a pre transition medical in 96 ( I had boobs)
Again thank you and please write more!
Alexis email domme33@aol.com

Comment by owd bob on 09/30/08
I have been bothered by some time by the same issue of time zone difference that Bobbie mentioned back in April of 2008. We all know Crystal does a lot of research in writing these stories and this error seems uncharacteristic. So I did some research (and cogitating) on the subject. Darla moved to Texas in May of 1966. Prior to the Uniform Time Act going into affect, states could exempt themselves from observing Daylight Savings Time and most Southern States, including Oklahoma and (as far as I know) Texas. So at the time, if New Jersey observed DST and Texas didn't, the time difference in May of 1966 *WOULD* be 2 hours. This would not be true in 1967 or later.

Comment by Shizukana Sakka on 09/24/08
I have thoroughly enjoyed reading this epic tale, and found Darla Anne's adventures in the corporate world to be quite enthralling. Though this story hasn't been updated since last March, I hope that you'll continue to share more of this highly enjoyable story with your readers.

Comment by Dh on 09/08/08
I have really enjoyed reading the story. It has been well written, and has a high 'feel-good' factor. I did find the tieing up in the barn disturbing so I skipped that, but I wasn't disappointed with the rest (by the way, what happened to Karen?). I would advise anyone who gets stuck on this part of the story to either bear with it or to continue once it has over. I was not disappointed with either this or the 'how I spent' serials. I'm looking forward to reading more of your chapters as they become available.

Comment by Starbuck on 09/05/08
I've been rereading this wonderful story and was suddenly struck by this strange thought...

With Darla Anne's interest in Oil thanks to Auntie... how long do you think it will be before that strange letter crosses her desk from a business that's just a little bit outside of her comfort zone but is too intriguing to pass up...

Let's call the company for sale, oh, I don't know... maybe Piedmont Polymers... you know, plastics... The name similarity causes her confusion at first until she realizes that it's another 'buy me' letter. Suddenly she launches a whole new division of Piermont that ties her two interests together...

Anywho... just brainstorming... you may take or leave as you see fit.

Starbuck


Comment by Maid Joy on 08/21/08
Just finished a two day marathon of reading, and this is a wonderful story. Just because the TG aspects have been reduced, the corporate maneuvering is awesome and it keeps the readers interested.

I have a feeling Grandma is setting DD up to take over. It only makes sense. Can't wait to see that announcement by Grandma.

I am loving this series. Please post the new chapters as fast as you can. Thanks hon.


Comment by Maltor on 08/18/08
Comment by Crystal on 08/16/08

Have you been peeking at the completed chapters I haven't posted yet? Darla Anne's world is about to be upset a bit. :)

No that is just cruel... When I saw that I immediately checked the story queue to see how far down the the new chapters were; only to have my hopes dashed...

As for the upset? Why do I have a feeling that it won't be coming from business world initially but from her possible boyfriend at college learning her secret and letting it out at the worst possible moment.

Well, whenever the latest chapters are ready to post I'll eagerly read them as I have the previous chapters of this amazing story. Keep up the good work and thank you for sharing this story with us.

-Maltor


Comment by Starbuck on 08/17/08
I'm a writer... nothing TG, yet...
but I could feel the anvil being poised! =D

Comment by Crystal on 08/16/08
Have you been peeking at the completed chapters I haven't posted yet? Darla Anne's world is about to be upset a bit. :)

Comment by Starbuck on 08/15/08
I am SOooooo jealous...

This character is living my dreams... Rich adoptive Grandmother, Powerful corporate position with the responsibility and expectations, and very best of all...

She's a PILOT!!!

One thing though... I notice with your stories that the TG situation sets things up and then the characters have everything go absolutely perfectly for them afterward. Darla Anne is gathering a significant collection of powerful and motivated enemies. Enemies with resources and drive to bring her down, hard.

In the interest of keeping the story fresh, you might consider having her 'enemies' start unraveling the David/Darla Anne connection. That should keep things more than interesting for quite a while in this story. (btw... hints seem to indicate that Darla Anne might be doing her SRS in France.)


Comment by Owd Bob on 07/14/08
Saw in a press release today that the real Katahdin Paper plans to close its mill at Millinocket, ME. Maybe the economy would have been better off if Darla Anne had not been fiction.

Comment by Jerry & Kathy on 04/19/08
My wife, Kathy, got me started reading your stories a few years ago.
She has previously written comments,but I thought it was time I also responded.
My family is from Austin, and it brought back many memories as I was there during the time frame of the story.I was back to Austin 2 years ago and you would not recognize it.
We are both still working, 'senior citizens' that enjoy well written stories. We look forward to future chapters.
Thank You
Jerry & Kathy

Comment by Noel Lexicon on 04/17/08
Crystal,

Your story telling talents are simply magnificent. Count me as one of your many devoted fans. Your proof reader is also doing a great job.

Now Darla is in a pool with larger more dangerous sharks. Great story telling - the menace just beyond the horizon.

May your quill never run out of ink!


Comment by Simon/Sara on 04/13/08
Crystal - It is hard to try to say something others have not already said about "Texas Gal", it is just so good. I started reading this last week and could not stop, the story just flows along so well I read the lot in 3 days, now we need MORE, MORE.
I cannot wait to see where this is going, Darla is so sharp and business wise yet so young and willing to learn. The story reminds me of younger days, growing up in an age that was far more forgiving and far less prejudiced that the one we live in today, where people could work hard and earn respect without the goody two shoes breathing down their necks.
Anyway, PLEASE write more, we all want to read more of Darla and her family and we are all dying to know if she will take over from Grandma.

Sara


Comment by Bobbie on 04/11/08
Crystal
Absolutely the most fascinating and amazing story 1-60.
A few minor errors which I caught regarding time difference New Jersey to Texas is One hour at least part of Texas you defined
not real sure about Big Bend and El Paso which may be on Mountain
time. Not all that important to the main story. Now it is two hours
difference to Portland. The portions dealing with learning to fly
brought back wonderfull memories. The out of her class smart one with
an uncanny memory for figures and astuteness remind me so much of
loved ones. Now let us have David/Darla decide to take the last step
and be able to enjoy that part of life, as a dear friend of mine has.
Please do continue on with the story even one segment at a time.

Bobbie


Comment by Janice Lynn on 03/25/08
Crystal, I am so happy to see new chapters to the Darla Ann story. This is a wonderful story to read. These last few chapters have been totally fun for me as I am from the Northwest (Washington State)orginally; and on top of that, my Parents used to live in Thompson Falls, Montana so I know the area as well. Many of the towns and locations you mention in the Northwest I have relatives in. What fun! Kinda been there, done that memories now that I live in Kentucky. Looking forward to more of the Darla Ann saga; your fan,
Janice Lynn Miller

Comment by Sarah Lynn Morgan on 03/24/08
This is still such a super story, Crystal. I'm always so glad when I find that you've posted new chapters. Really excellent quality writing, that keeps my attention, and my interest at a very high level. Thanks

Sarah Lynn


Comment by Del on 03/20/08
Thanx for the new Texas girl !! This has to be one of the best stories on the net

Thank You !!!


Comment by ChrityLake on 03/20/08
Crystal = thank you very much. i just have to admit to a bit of depression because i did not see any mor C. Sprite in the cued up list

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 03/17/08
Thank you Crystal!

I can't wait for more! Well, I guess I can since this story is so good.

I wonder if she'll ever again get the press attention she once did when she was just a rising star in the lumber mill business. I admit to missing the special attention she received by that trade magazine.

I think she deserves a special edition from the other trade publications now that she has expanded her golden touch to her other divisions she has created. How she dealt with South Core and now is taking on the "Big Boys!" in their own backyard. What a scoop for the trade or one trade magazine to get "THE" story on DD.

Is her Grandma going to tap Darla Ann on her shoulder to begin her transition to running Grandma's Empire soon?

Great stuff Crystal, great writing!
Huggles
Angel O'Hare


Comment by Nicole on 03/16/08
Thank you so much for the latest 5 chapters. I've already read them three times and look forward to reading them several more times in the six months or so it is likely to take you to write more. Please, won'[t youi answer our prayers and give some more DD? Everything else on your site pales to nothing compared to Texas Gal.

Comment by Dru on 03/16/08
A great story and the intrigue continues. I look forward to the next installment.

On another note, can you do a couple more chapters, at least, of "I can't go home like this"? It ended at an inopportune place. It too is a great story and needs a conclusion.

Dru


Comment by rb on 03/16/08
Thanks again. It was nice to see DD make a mistake, and to see her use her plane in a partly irrational side trip and underbid the boxing stuff just to set that she's NOT actually an incarnation of the godhead....

Don't wait forever to work more on this, we really appriciate it.

i SUSPECT I see a rational "ending" in about 2 years after dd fixes her "little problem - probebly overseas somewhere, her "grandmother' passes, and dd assumes the larger corporate reigns... She HAS to find something to do with her days beyond playing monopoly.....


Comment by Lynn on 03/16/08
Crystal

Thanks for the new chapters.

Lynn


Comment by Richard Hanson on 03/15/08
This story is great and is very good reading - I'm asking you when are you going to continue "I Can't Go Home Like This" since you left us hanging in England with her so called boyfriend. Otherwise keep up the good/great work - Love it! Richard

Comment by Rose on 03/15/08
Crystal you have done it again. 5 wonderful chapters to this exellent story. I also agree with one of your reveiwers in that I always look for new chapters to be posted. Please keep writing this great story.
luv Rose.

Comment by suna on 03/15/08
Once again an enjoyable set of chapters. I am wondering if you are concurrently doing a masters thesis in a business finance class? Spending a lot of time in the story about taking advantage of financial pressure on the small or singular business placed by business practice in unethical practice (Core) and normal practices to eliminate competitors (alliance -- so far anyway).

I am overjoyed about the flawed attempt at buying equipment, the team communication was not as concise as during previous outings and an offer of 7,500 is actually poor judgement considering that s/he had spent more than that just to get there (fuel and wear on the plane) and having a dozen people spend four hours would cost another 10K considering they are all upper management. Just the salvged parts would be worth more. I'm surprised the pettite genius didn't offer a deal at 75k or even 50k that included a plan for damaged part replacement.

Anyway, I await the next chapter and thank you again for the view from your mind's eye.


Comment by Diane Castle on 03/15/08
It's always great to see another set of chapters of "Texas Gal". This is the continuing story I look for first, every time I come to StorySite.

I loved watch Darla Ann fighting South-Core, and I look forward to her wrestling with Alliance in the near future.

Thanks!
Diane


Comment by ??? on 03/14/08
Bless you Crystal for the 5 new chapters. Ms. Drake's saga is always worth reading.

Again, thanks.


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Comment by David on 03/14/08
Thank you ... the story takes twists and turns ... South Core simmers ... Alliance takes notice ... I only hope that the next chapters continue DD's rise in the business world ... moves into Canada perhaps ...

The story is as always fantastic. You have a gift that draws the reader into a world that is foreign to us, and yet you tell it such a way as to enthrall ...

I do look forward to chapter's 51 and beyond ...


Comment by Bernice on 02/06/08
Thank you for these new episodes. PLEASE continue this story as soon as you can. Episode 45 left me on the edge of my seat wondering what's coming next. This is a terrific story.

Comment by Anita on 01/21/08
The story is amazingly detailed and spell-binding. Once I began reading it I couldn't stop. And you've reached a spot where there are so many things that future episodes can delve into: the textile division problems, the continued problems with South-Core, the existence of a spy within DD's company, the discovery of Lucas Porter, the fact that both Mother and Auntie are seasoned enough to be weary but young enough to be "looking", etc.

At the beginning of part 36 you explained that you took a 4 & a 1/2 year rest and that you are attempting to stay true to the original writing style. If you think you are having a problem with that in future chapters, don't let it worry you, because as you have changed, so too has DD. Whereas she began as a 12 year old, she is (at this point) 16 years old, is driving a car, is getting her pilot's license, and is obviously a different, a much more grown up person than she was when you began writing the story. It should be expected that her outlook, her vocabulary, and her demeanor will have changed.

One thing I think you can (and should) develop just a little more is/are personal relationships for Susan, Mary, Judy, & DD. Whether it is at the Riviera or at school, all of these people are growing in knowledge but are not showing the social development that takes place in a young adult. Granted, they may not meet too many people while "down on the ranch", but put them in school or in France, and there are going to be bodies all over the place. Granted many of the people at her university will know of DD, but there will be newer students or students not in her curriculum that may not know their family name (it is a large university). Additionally, there will be intermingling every time any of the three sisters go to a library, an ice cream store, or just walk down the street.

Close personal relationships may be a bit more awkward for DD for multiple reasons: her high IQ and her diminished age. Probably more telling as to DD's staid existence and the fact that she is keeping most people at a distance is that fact that one of these days she will have to deal with her "little" problem. It hasn't been explained how she has avoided detection in PE classes, but I've assumed that she has taken classes such as golf, tennis, bowling, shooting, etc. where the classes are geared toward the individual rather than toward team activity. She will have to address the little problem at some point in the future, but I'm sure that she will handle her future development as smoothly as she does everything else.

Please do not stay away for another 4 and 1/2 years. I truly love reading this story and can't wait until you "get back on the horse" and continue the series.


Comment by Briar on 01/19/08
Thank you dear Crystal, for such a lovely christmas present ! I refer to the latest chapters in the on going (again) tale of DD. I did not take my electronic friend with me over the festive seasons when I visited my relatives in France, so today when I decided to look just in case, I had a lovely surprise.

Working in business, I can confirm that in real life it is every bit as exciting as you have portrayed, although as yet I have not had any bodies stuffed inside drums to deal with! Suicides, hostile take-overs, an internal putch where I had to fire the CEO and replace him as Chairperson on the Board, and being invited to help sort out a sales force in Germany but instead firing the local General Manager, then getting hired as CEO pro tem until the US Mother Company could find a permanent replacement. But no murders yet. I am in the pharmaceuticals branch, but I guess Timber and Paper and Textiles are much the same - people are the same, all over and in whatever branch, and the same problems occur. Your writing achieves very high levels of realism and verisimilitude. The TG aspect has been pushed down to a tiny background now, in Texas Gal, but surely that is what TGs would want, that shows that we are fully integrated and have made a successful transition? I love this tale, and your others. Hopefully we will see the other unfinished epic grow new chapters too, soon ? Will we?

Hugs,

Briar


Comment by Hiliary Mariadubh nicSeamus on 01/15/08
Dear Crystal

The wait was worth it...Chapters 41 to 45 of Texas Girl are excellent. My guess in Oct of 2007 seems to be right....DD has been going very well...and now it looks like she may be steppping into BIG trouble...ie a murder case.....should be interesting.
egards
hiliary


Comment by Susan Heywood on 01/06/08
I absolutely love this story and am so pleased that you are continuing it. Your attention to detail is amazing and if you don't have some inside business knowledge to make everything so realistic, then all I can say is that your research is astonishing in its depth and scope.

I do consider it unlikely that DD would have had blockers and hormones at such an early age, particularly in the 60's, but without them there would be no plot!

I look forward very much to future episodes as and when you can write them.

Kind regards,

Susie


Comment by becky on 01/04/08
this story would be great for a movie it is great story clean and postive aspects to it

Comment by Rachel on 01/02/08
It's great that DD,s story has finally been continued. I started reading her back in 98 and was disappointed when you stopped updating. Welcome back DD.

Comment by Jeanne on 01/01/08
What a Christmas present. Thank you so very much. Please don't stop now, as others have already stated "this story and your writting is the best". Hope you have a safe and wonderful New Year.
Jeanne

Comment by RFB on 12/31/07
YES, YES, Yes, More, More, More, (Please, may I have some more?)

One of the best written stories available. Makes some of the hard cover books I have recieved read like trash.

Please note I will only become abusive if you do not continue.

Can you tell, I like this tale. This is one of very few where I print out and keep a hard copy. Just curious, will any of your long stories cross, I think it would be interesting. maybe getting a movie studio as a part of a buy out

Thank you

RFB


Comment by jillmi on 12/31/07
You are the master of the story arc.

In my nearly forty years in business I've seen first hand most of what Darla is experiencing. You have hit the majority of it for a home run in accuracy and emotional content.

Jill


Comment by Dave on 12/30/07
Having been a fan of your writing for some time, I was glad to see that you have picked up the pen to continue DD's story over the last few months. My original interest was it's transgender theme, however, I am now totally enthralled in the world of paper mfg ... so now we have a dead body ... a shareholder's meeting ... environmental conciousness ... a pilot's license ... outsourcing (textiles) ... and who knows what else ... Please keep providing installments, I can't wait to read them. Your style is the best of all of the writer's that I enjoy.

Comment by Andy on 12/29/07
I still love the story. it still manages to hock me and leaves me wanting more. I have loved the story from when i first started the story back in 1999 on fictionmania then continued here on crystals own site. Crystal please be a dear and write more & faster...lol. I know this takes time and i would not want you to rush such a good story for me..

Take care
Andy.


Comment by Scrambler_J on 12/28/07
DAMN! What a way to end the year! I was overjoyed to see that Crystal had posted more of Texas Gal. I love the drama that unfolds and find myself screaming when those oh so wonderful clifhanging chapters suddenly end!

While the TG element isn't a major part of the story any longer it was nice to see small touches on it to remind us all that DD is really a boy( or at least a very small part of her is) under that very feminine body.

I'm still looking forward to the day that this tale and I can't go home met up..with Crystal of that tale meeting a much older and no doubt far richer DD, even if it is just in passing.

Here is to hoping that chapter 46 comes out right as 2008 kicks off!

-j-


Comment by Heather on 12/27/07
i have throughly enjoyed the Texas Girl series even though the t part hasnt been mentioned in who knows how long. i do see it as possibly becomeing part of the story as Darla gets older and has some time between school and being an entrepenouer for some social life and possibly a love interest. I thought it might materialize in a young flight instructor but no :-( Maybe it will happen during a buyout attempt.

But please please continue the story regardless of how you envision it.

Heather


Comment by Bob E. on 12/27/07
I have really enjoyed following Darla Anne's adventures to date. I really don't see how this story falls into the realm of TG fiction since the TG part takes place early on. It is an interesting story however. I can hardly wait for you to conclude it, although it logicaly doesn't have a conclusion. Thank you for providing this wonderful site and your special stories.

Bob E.


Comment by Ruth on 12/27/07
Crystal!!

This is awesome. I really appreciate Storysite, and your Texas Gal serial is wonderful. Thanks. I sometimes consider submitting a story, but I don't see how I can appreciably and originally add to what's already here. The stories are grand. I allow great latitude to fantasy, realizing that it can't be totally realistic. My dad would have probably murdered Mom, sis, and me if he had ever come home to a tableau like that. Love the '60's milieu, clothes hadn't gone totally cheap then, you still had bust darts, etc. Ever read Erwin and Kinchens's Clothing For Moderns? 1964. It's got the greatest comments in it, such as "Every girl, even a slender one, needs a girdle, not to compress, but to smooth the figure".

Deepest regards,

Ruth


Comment by dsb on 12/26/07
I'm disappointed that Crystal continued to publish this story on this website. Although a well written and popular story, this story is not the kind of story I'm looking for on this web site. The only way that I could conceive of Crystal thinking that it would be appropriate to continue publishing this story on this website would be to update the summary on her authors page for this story with the prologue that she was gracious enough to include in the installments she published after 2002.

Comment by dsb on 12/26/07
While the writing is so good that I feel that I'm reading a well renowned published author (michner comes to mind), the premise in the later chapters gets so far fetched that I could no longer stand to continue to read this story. After all, a 13 year old college student building a $100M business during her breaks from college? If she really was that brilliant, she would also have been able to find a cure for cancer before she graduated from college.

Comment by woody on 12/26/07
Made it through the new additions to Texas Gal today. Great chapters. Loved Darla's solution to not being able to buy the machines. Wonder if anything will come of the sabotage in future chapters. What an ending to ch 45!

Thanks Crystal.


Comment by Rose on 12/26/07
Hi Crystal,
What can I say but wow!!. What a great 5 new parts to this remarkable story.
I agree totally with PatJ so please keep writing this wonderful series.

Luv Rose


Comment by PatJ on 12/26/07
Talk about a cliff hanger ---

I devoured the new episodes - your writing style captivates -
please continue the story!


Comment by Lynn on 12/26/07
Thanks the Christmas present! Now I'm dying to find out about the body!

Lynn


Comment by dave edwards on 12/26/07
brill love all your stories pleas wright loads more

Comment by Robi on 12/26/07
I'm so glad to see new chapters for this story! This is such a good story!

Comment by jeannette on 12/25/07
I finally had enough time to read your story (Chapter 1). So far, it is well written- albeit, long. By the time that I read your story completely (49 Chapters), I figure that it will be NEXT Christmas (2008).... AND,... that is a COMPLEMENT, to your EXCELLENT writing & imagination. Keep up the excellent writing.

Comment by rb on 12/25/07
continued in part 46!!!! AAAAARRRGGGGGGHHHHHHH!!!!!

on the other hand, golly, no worries about enough warehouse space for the impending upcoming missisipi river floods....

:-)


Comment by Jenna on 12/25/07
My, My what an interesting twist. Sounds like the body hasn't been there long. It might seem as though the seller knew something was up. Or perhaps there is some mob interest in this property. Maybe Darla wil be calling on some of the more "heavy" handed oil co. tactics depending on how sticky this turns out to be.
I really look forward to more.

Comment by woody on 12/24/07
Wow, more Texas Gal! Thankyou Crystal. I too wonder about "I Can't Go Home Like This" but it's just great to see that you are still writing. I can be patient.

Comment by Richard Hanson on 12/13/07
I have enjoyed this and two of the other stories you had written amd I wonder since its been 5 years since you updated the other two are you ever going to continue with them or try to have finish story of this "Tex Gal", or "I can't go home like this" which kind of lefts us hanging are these going to be Published in a completed story which would be super if your not going to finish them on-line. Thanks For Very Good Written Stories Otherwise. Richard L Hanson

Comment by mark on 12/12/07
thank you, thank you, thank you, has read the story 4 time's already and had lost hope for new chapters.
hope to see more chapters.



Comment by Bernice on 11/23/07
I came back to "Texas Gal" for the new chapters as I really enjoy this story. I just can't wait for you to add more chapters. I hope to see more of this story just as soon as you possibly can write the new chapters. Thank you for writing such a delightful story.

Comment by Rowanleia on 11/14/07
Oh Cristal,..

I don't know where to start in my praise,.. I felt a part of the whole story,.. I was Darla Anne, for a few minutes and the tears flowed freely,.. I had to keep stopping to wipe my eyes so I could read the text,.. I grew up when even thinking like this was dangerous,.. I just recently retired and am now actively pursuing my androgenous self,..
I have experienced being a serving sub,.. but not as a girl,.. oh wow,.. you touched me so deeply,.. thank you and Goddess bless you and keep you,..

rowanleia


Comment by Nicole on 11/01/07
Thank You! Thank You! Thank You! I would love to read more of DD. Please?

Comment by Hiliary on 10/29/07
Hey Crystal

Girl...long time but worth the wait. Watching DAD outwit Southern is a joy... and how she copes with the problems her success cause is even more fun.:D
Eventually the other shoe will fall and DAD will be in big trouble...and half the fun will again be seeing her cope with it.
Keep it up.
Hmmm......
Maybe we will in the near future see more for "I Can't Go Home Like This...."???
Love adn regards
hiliary


Comment by Zomba on 10/20/07
This novel has been one that I have read and re-readm beginning when it was originally being posted. I am amazed at how seamlessly the older and newer chapters went together, and how well the total story has been constructed.

Please continue the story if you can find the inspiration and the time. DD deserves to move on, and the textile industry could use some help from Mrs. Moore and DD.


Comment by thyme on 09/29/07
love texas gal and would like to see more chapters added. would also like to see an expansion of her sisters, aunts, and grandmothers roles

Comment by allan tuthill on 09/15/07
i have read and re-read texal gal and can hardly wait till there are more chapters. each time that i read it i feel that iam also in the story. to me you are one fine writer and hope to read much much more in the near future. again thank you very much for a very good story. allan tuthill

Comment by Nikki on 09/08/07
When I saw that more chapters had been added I just had to go back and start from chapter 1. I have read this story numerous times and still find it very entertaining and hope to see more in the near future. Please keep up the good work.

Comment by Susan Heywood on 09/07/07
I just love this story, it makes my heart sing. OK, given the period in which it is set it might be construed as a little fanciful but, hey, I still love it.

Very many thanks for adding the latest chapters; I didn't see any join!

I know that the TG element is more or less sorted but it's a great story of a business genius and your knowledge and research is simply awesome.

Very many congratulations.

Susie


Comment by cleo on 09/03/07
My prayers have been answered! Over the past months,I have been checking to see if any further episodes of your two wonderful stories were available. You haven't lost your touch, the new chapters are a nice continuation of TG. We all hope that we will see more of ICGHLT as well. Thank you so much!!!

Comment by Anthony on 08/31/07
So glad to see more of this tale. I have enjoyed the exploits of DD immensly and am champing at the bit for more.
I would also appreciate more of "I can't go home like this"

Comment by Rena on 08/30/07
Hey Crystal glad to see you add more to one of your stroies and this is a nice one still waiting on more to I Can't Go Home Like This.

Comment by Dori on 08/30/07
YAY, more Texas gal. Love the story.

Comment by Frieda on 08/30/07
My birthday came two weeks early this year... so I've sent my present to you. A single episode would have been a joy - five is a feast. I hope you can carry the story on. (And some more ICGHLT wouldn't go amiss either...)

WRT to Darla's activities arousing the interest of the SEC and IRS, I have two observations:

The first I cannot quantify (being neither in the US or the early 1970s) but I believe that regulatory control may have been somewhat more 'hands-off' there and then. This is a looooong way before Sarbanes-Oxley.

The second is that there seems to me to be a significant back-story with Grandma pulling several of the Darla-puppet's strings (some of the 'helpful' leaks to the press for instance). In this, Grandma is showing good management - she is allowing Darla's deal-making skills free rein, whilst supporting Darla in growing her other business skills at a rate that she can achieve.

I'm sure that Bob Warren and the Ameri-Moore head office are dealing quite competently with the SEC and with Darla's remuneration, and her benefits/expenses.

When the time is right I think we will see that there is a trust fund for Darla somewhere, arranged by Grandma with authority from Mom and/or Auntie. After all, Darla was a minor when she purchased Piermont (she has only just now turned 16), and thus things done by those with parental/guardian authority without Darla's consent or knowledge - such as a trust-fund being set up for her income - would be quite legal.

What is odd to me is that *Darla* hasn't asked the question...

Xi


Comment by Rone Welles on 08/28/07
Thank you for the extended story we all needed this .. your writing
and style are the best and the story is a fun and interesting one.

I hope you continue writing and finish this work of art that will last into the next centry ... some stories donot need smutt to be top rated .. you have proved that with your work ... THANK YOU ...

KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK WE LOVE YOU ....... Rone


Comment by Nicole on 08/27/07
Way back in 9/6/01
Anonymous posted a comment which raises the question:
How Mable (GrandMa) is avoiding the tax issue
concerning DD, she doesn't seem to get a paycheck
yet she is President of a Large company.

"Darla works for AmeriMoore, while I don't remember any mention of her getting a paycheck for her efforts. With all the press attention, don't you think the IRS (the income tax folks) would find that more than a little suspicious. She has recieved quite a number of non-monitary benifits from her "Grand Mother" aka "her employer". Everything from huge gifts of clothing, free annual trips to France,
the list goes on and on. I cannot see the tax man not becomming interested eventually. Watching Darla and Mabel deal with the tax man might be fun.

Darla, operating for Amerimoore has now purchased a number of companies. This is an activity the SEC (Securities and Exchange Commission) very much likes to stick their noses in. Now we can assume for the sake of the story that none of the companies she purchased was publically traded (privately owned, no stock), but Amerimoore is supposed to be a big public company. But I believe Purchases of small companies by larger "public" companies is watched by the SEC, if only for anti-trust purposes. An inquisative SEC investigator might spice up Darla's life a little."

After reading the story I had the same thought.

I think it would be fun to find out.

Nicole


Comment by joanne206 on 08/27/07
I'm very happy to read the new chapters . I just hope that there will be more new postings in the furture and not take years for them.

Comment by Ackack on 08/27/07
Dear Crystal,

Many many thanks for the recent additions to this wonderful story. From your comments earlier this year, I was expecting some form of end or closure, and was very excited to find that at the end of 40 that there will be more to come. Please do your very best to continue this story, and hopefully not another 5 years.
Others have commented on the graphics and style of writing, and I will add my additional coments of approval.

Also many thanks for manage'n to keep the site up and running with all your RL issues. Time to shake the money box again and 'pay my dues'.

A.


Comment by Jenna on 08/26/07
Just loved the new chapters, this story is alot of fun. I look forward to more. Thanks.

Comment by JEANNE on 08/26/07
Dear Crystal,
Thank you so very much. I've carried your stories in my palm pilot for years and have reread them many times. Your just made me and by the comments by others very happy by adding these new chapters. Thay are just as good and a delight to read. Please don't wait so long again but if you have to "just plain thank you" for these new ones.
Huggles,
Jeanne

Comment by Kevin Smith on 08/26/07
I just read Texas Gal chapters 1-39 and had a wonderful time. Iwas touched and laughed out loud several times.. I have only one thing to say: Can I have some more please? Thanks

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 08/25/07
Thank you so much Crystal, for bringing back Darla Anne and her adventures. I have read stories from others who tried to continue Texas Gal, but didn't even come close. Even tho there seems to be a more serious side of Darla Anne since she has been in college, she has not lost her ability to be genuine, forthright, and easy going. She buys companies with a steel determination, and can go to a company picnic like the girl next door. I have loved Darla Anne from the very first chapter, and you have not disappointed me in keeping her pure. But I also agree too, that you shouldn't keep us waiting this long for the next installment. :P

Love & hugs,
Barbara Lynn Terry

"If I have to be this girl in me, Then I have the right to be."


Comment by ??? on 08/25/07
Crystal,

Thank you for the 4 new episodes!!

Pretty please with sugar on top, don't make us wait 5 more years for the next update.

Like many of the other commenters, I can't get enough of DD, who is an absolutely delightful young LADY.


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Comment by brandie on 08/25/07
You made my whole week with your new chapters. I hope that you enjoyed writing them as much as we enjoy reading them.
huggggs
brandie

Comment by Nicole on 08/24/07
I waited 5 years before reading this because I was afraid
you would leave it unfinished, and I hate unfinished stories.
Now that you have started writing again I decided to read it.
It's a wonderful story.
I'm sorry I waited so long to read it.

Nicole


Comment by Christy Lake on 08/24/07
Love it! Love it!! Love it!!! Thank you for continuing on of my Favorite fiction Characters. Looking forward to more of DD.

Comment by ChrisW on 08/23/07
Crystal,

Thank You!

Huggels
ChrisW


Comment by DeeDee Clark on 08/23/07

Dear Crystal.

I see you have finally posted your latest chapters. They are wonderful.

Now, I give you the same offer I gave you for Texas Gal. I will send you $100.00 dollars for more of I can't go home like this. But I will need the correct name for PP.

You stories seem to improve as you write them. Three different stories, all teenagers, one a business tycoon, another one an actress (of some fame) and a TV news commentator. You must sit up nights thinking up these wonderful stories.

The fact that they are all boys, acting as girls gives a little more spice to the tales. Keep up the good work.

Thanks again for many hours of good reading. It is a shame they cannot be printed and put on the open market.

DeeDee


Comment by Beverly Colleen on 08/23/07
Oh My, Oh My, Oh My! It has been a long and fruitful wait for the latest chapters of this wonderful serial. If anything your writing style has improved and the added images were a nice touch. Well worth the intervening five years since the last update. Like a fine wine, improvement comes with age. It is good to see you continuing to bring us this interesting look into the world of business tycoon DD. I look forward to many more chapters and if it takes another five years, well so much the better the story I say. (But I certainly hope it isn't quite that long a wait to find out how long it will take DD to own everything on the Monopoly board that is her world.) :)

Kudos Crystal!


Comment by Brenda on 08/23/07
Thank You! It's a GOOD story with VERY GOOD writing! I'll read all the chapters you are willing to write.

hugs
Brenda


Comment by Chri Bailey on 08/23/07
Very interesting story please continue with it.

Comment by Rose on 08/23/07
Hi Crystal.
Was I surprised when I opened the "Whats New" postings to see a further 4 parts to "Texas Gal" there ready to read. You have another 4 wonderful parts that I have enjoyed reading. Please continue with some more parts soon. It would be nice to see Darla become the full woman that she should be.

Luv Rose.


Comment by woody on 08/23/07
I'd never really expected to see this continued. Thank-you! You've made my day.

Comment by RB on 08/23/07
Thanks! I had hoped and prayed that you would continue DD's story!!!

Wonderful!

Thank you so much.


Comment by Nist on 08/22/07
Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.

*Nist Bibbles with happyness.


Great story. made me laugh out loud on a couple of occasions.


Comment by Briar on 08/22/07
Oh Crystal, et tusend tack for adding four more chapters on one day.

You remind me of something my Daddy used to tell me when I was little - "Everything comes to them that waits"... We all waited, and we all wished, and eventually it happened !

The story continued in the same style and the characters were the same - it was as though the years between had never been.

Your style of writing is so good, it is sad you dont have more time for writing more of your own tales.

I am going to push my luck now, but here goes anyway - when do you think we will see more of "I cant go home like this"?

Love, and thanks,

Briar


Comment by Angel O'Hare on 08/22/07
A dream come true, well, at least some of it Crystal.

Thank you so much for continuing this wonderful series and I'm SO looking forward to the next chapters. Her career is really climbing and soon Grandma will be tapping her for more involvement at the corporate level. She has shown Grandma that she can handle even the most perplexing problems by delegating smartly and now by using her own name and fame to get the things she needs for her own little corporation.

I wonder when she will slip off to get her final physical abnormality corrected?

As always you've written a story I can sink into with my mind, body, and soul!

Thank you so much Crystal!

Huggles
Angel


Comment by Gwen Boucher on 08/22/07
Hi Crystal:

I am glad to see that you decided to add to this story. Now I have to figure out how far I got with it before. I had some huge interuptions in my life in the interviening time and forgot a lot.

Many Blessings

Gwen (Gwen Brown)


Comment by Eric on 08/22/07
Thanks so much for more of the series. When it first came out I would transfer the story to my PDA for reading on my commute and I'm sure that folks sitting near me on the train were curious as to just what was causing the chuckles. I'm old enough to have read the Horatio Alger books before they were too far out of date and enjoy the triumph of willpower and good intentions. You've managed to capture this essence as well as our "special" point of view. Like a lot of other folks I'm sure, I think I will print out the series and re-read it so I don't lose any of the plot-line as well as just plain enjoyment.

Comment by suna on 08/22/07
For the most part the new chapters are about running the business, not necessarily a bad thing, unless of course the story loses part of the resson it was/is so popular. The interaction between the characters is nearly all about business, s/he wants a thing and it happens. TA_DA!

The personal time with the family and co-workers in the new chapters is nearly non-existant. Descriptions of opening presents or a couple lines like -i went riding today on my .... carrot and brush- can be just as boring as paragraphs describing getting dressed differently each and every day.

I hope you find more to write about all the 'family' and s/he is still a 16 year old girl, mostly. Yes, brilliant perhaps, but except for the 'thrill' moments not very much emotion shows. S/he is getting lost in the turmoil.

If that is by design I look forward to reading a huge growing-up period outside of the business track.

PS.. I'll be truely shocked if s/he does not pay a market price for the barn full of crates. It would be so low not to and well.. it would be more like stealing, too much like the real business world.

Best of days


Comment by Shuyun on 08/22/07
Great just Great!!!

Comment by chae on 07/08/07
Once aging I have reread Texas Gal and love it just as much as the first time I read it, the only problem is that it has been hanging unfinished for so long,

Comment by Janice on 04/20/07
Crystal,
I just finished reading your story "Taxas Gal" What Fun! I throughly enjoyed all of it and am very sad to not finding a continuing groupd chapters. All of your characters are truly "fleshed out" and you get very engrossed in reading about them and getting to like them as real people. PLEASE, PLEASE write more chapters so we can all see how "Bliss Sisters" come out as well as "Gramma".
Hugs, Janice

Comment by James Q. Burgess (Jamie E.) on 04/14/07
I am re-reading Texas Gal, I Can't Go Home Like This and What I Did Last Summer after an interval of about 7 years. As a crossdresser, what I mostly wanted was the emotional connection with the 'feminine' and this is what I see repeatedly in all 3 stories. I see that many comments ask for 'more', but it's the authors mind-set and how it illuminates my mind-set. They are all stories with no endings. Few of the postings on Storysite are from writers who realize that both sexes have fantasies about each other, yet there are characters like this in both Texas Gal (Marcotti sister) and What I Did Last Summer (???) The stories that particularly appeal to me utilixe these unconscious fantasies in ways that support the emotional growth of both parties. They are (for me) the equivalent of Rohrschach tests in that they illuminate the variations in the TG phenomena. I rarely read the X & XXX stories, because for me the TG phenomena is about emotional or symbolic connection not sperm-transfer and orgasms.

Comment by Keith on 04/08/07
I just got done reading Texas Gal for the third time and still find it very addicting. I know that I will read it again in the near future and hope to see more chapters. Tkank you for a well written piece of entertainment.

Comment by Danny ? Coffey on 03/02/07
Thanks forsome of the most wonderful stories I Have ever read,Darla Ann, Crystal, and Ashlee Have all been excellent reading and make me wish I was young and able to meet wonderful girls like this. Not because of their wealth or fame, but the way they truly care about their freinds and families. And the way they can truly care about others, Even though I am a 40something male your stories give me hope that loving and caring people will still each other. Love should be based on the person and their hearts,Not what is between their legs.

If I had been blessed with girlfreinds like these when younger their little secret would easily have been over looked to know someone as nice and caring as these characters.

Thanks So Much for the wonderful storries and PLEASE PLEASE Write more about Darla Ann and Crystal Please don't leaveus in suspense.

Thank you for reading and being you.

Danny Coffey


Comment by LeiaMarie Roberts on 02/22/07
I guess that after all these years you just are not going to finish Texas Gal regardless. That is so sad. I cannot imagine what an effort on your part it took to write what you have here and there are things in real life that simply do not allow a completion. I would if I could but I can't applies here I guess.

Comment by Heather on 02/19/07
Crystal youve got me caught in your web again and then levae us hanging.

Texas Girl is fabulus but so unfinished :-(

Please Please give us more


Comment by juanita rushworth on 02/07/07
i cant tell you how much i loved your story. I couldnt wait to read the next chapter every time i had to turn it off. I just dream of how great it would be to have a life like darla anne

Comment by Angela E. on 01/20/07
I just read the first chapter of "Texas Gal" and WOW!I LOOOOVE it.Can't wait to read chapter two, but I'm trying to limit myself to a chapter a day so I can savor the experience.I'm planning to read all of your works.Luv ya.

Comment by johncorc visitor from Stardust on 01/03/07
What is happening? I'm becoming enamored with your characters Crystal. I've heard about your work and, it is sweet smoozeduction to be pulled along a chapter-a-day.( Got some control so far). I quit reading the comments when I saw hint of what is coming. The fact that readers are begging for more speaks of addiction. Should I be afraid,.......maybe much afraid? All the better! Lovin' it so far!
Thank-you!
.........nuffa my nuthin'.......johncorc
P.S. ..nylon rope huuuh ?

Comment by silvia on 12/23/06
Crystal,

Your stories are wonderful and we all hope that you can continue or finish some of the unfinished ones. A lot of fans would be very happy to see some more work. I echo the offer from at least one other reader to pay something for finished work.

Have a very happy holiday and year. Your great fan,

Silvia


Comment by Chae on 07/25/06
Two days ago i set down to once again read Texas Gal, and once again i really enjoyed the story the only problem is that you leave us hanging with no end. I would just like to say that i hope you can find the time to finish this story someday because like many others have said it is to good to just leave it unfinished

Comment by DeeDee Clark on 07/21/06
Dear Crystal,

I will give you $100.00 by way of PayPal if you will finish Texas Gal and I Can't Go Home Like This.


Comment by Jim on 07/12/06
Highly entertaining story. I love the way Darla-Ann has built her company up.

I would to see more chapters.

Some sugestion as to plots:

Textiles should start a small farm of textiles in one corner of a cattle ranch to see if the idea of overcropping without leaving an area free of crops to recover.

Darla trained Susan on Inspections, perhaps Judy could something learn something from watching Darla at Work.

Perhaps someone that knows Darla from school could get a job in the new computer department.

I am sure there are more ideas out there. Thanks for a wonderfull story.

Comment by diana on 07/03/06
A very good story, but,..

PLease finish  it, or at least add a few more chapters.

Comment by rone on 06/09/06
not much to be added that was not already said ..
except THANK YOU and when are you gonna finish this?

a good finish would make a great movie ... a lot of good clean fun and intertaining ...

Thank you  RONE

Comment by Suna on 05/01/06
Well, I just completed chapter 35... the story has a diary like feel to the chapters. The first person recitation of events happening in her presense and additions of daily activitles like nightly rituals and fingers pruning in the bath presents the immediate surroundings.  The early times of having David in the background filtering information so Darla could continue in her 'role' that after 3 years became a 'we' gave simple answers to us about the transformation that started with a surprising shot in the doctors office and kept the could be horror of discovery and realization of not being a GG out of view.

An imagninative and endering plot covering the veiled change of gender.

Ohh... how I hate that you have stopped, must be other events in your life that puts your writing aside, I hold no grudge for the 20 hours you have enthralled me.  

Best wishes for you and yours.

Comment by john amonson on 04/19/06
Hi Crystal,
I've read all your stories at least three times. Will you please add to Texas Gal and some of your others. Your to good a writer just to sit back and waste your wonderful tallents. Thanks soooo much.
Skip

Comment by Joe Feldman on 03/17/06
come on hon, it's been almost 4 years since you've added anything to this wonderful story.  A lot of your faithful readers are wondering if you've quit.  Please don't, as I've enjoyed all of them so much.  Respectfully, Josephrecon@aol.com

Comment by Robert on 02/20/06
Texas Gal is such a great story, but it isn't finished!

This story has so many intersections that could be revisited, and it deserves to come to some sort of conclusion.

DD could take over cotton and textiles to show that her work in wood and paper were not just flukes. (She sure did get a cracker jack management team from Grandma.) Also, there could be a fiasco - not many people, regardless of sexal orientation, who build almost 300 million through business acquisitions have no failures. Dealing with failure is a part of what makes humans human. We know a lot about DD and success; DD and her approach to failure would really give a new dimension to the story.

Please don't just leave your major character several years from having SRS or finding some sort of life away from acquisitions with her little deformity. The story (and the writing) is too good to have no conclusion.

Comment by Wallie on 10/29/05
Hi Crystal,

WOW!

Thank you for a beautiful story about a beautiful family.

I have known a couple of child prodigies, so it didn't surprise me that Darla Anne was so smart. I was pleasantly surprised that she had three sisters who were also child prodigies. Her mother, aunt, and "grandma" also fit into that catagory.

In addition to being smart, they all had a sense of humor and a very well disciplined work ethic. They never procrastinated as they helped each other clean the house and stables, did the cooking and baking together, and cleaned up together after themselves when they were finished eating. They went riding together, helped each other with their schoolwork, helped each other with their jobs, communicated extremely well with each other, and were smart enough to get enough rest every night.

They are a family I wish I had been born into.

I felt chills up and down my spine when "grandma" adopted them.

All the women were very accepting of David's transformation into Darla Anne. Another example of the women working together as a loving family.

The scenes I enjoyed most though were the communal baths, where all the women (I include Darla Anne as one of the women) got in the hugh bathtub every morning toghther. A family that helps each other this way is indicative of their love for each other and will remain a close family forever.

I am a slow reader. I began reading "Texas Gal" the first of September, and finished it two days ago. Then I read all of the "Reader's Comments". All in all, it was an interesting journey for me.

Please continue "Texas Gal". You have so much more love to share in your stories and I hope you don't let this one fade away.

Thank you again for a beautiful story about a beautiful family.

Peace and Love,

Wallie

Comment by dennis schultz on 09/10/05
Read the story the texas gal. I thought it was a very good, it made you laugh at times and also made you cry a little. I hope that you write more to this story, it was great and hope some day to be able to read more about the texas gal.
thank you again.

Comment by Peta on 05/29/05
Crystal and "C. Sprite",

Texture!  I've been trying to think of why I like this story so much.  It has texture.  Yes, there is a TG element, but even without that, it holds together.  Thank you C. Sprite !!!

Unfortunately, Crystal, you only have up to chapter 35 which references chapter 36 but leaves us wanting.

From the copyright, chapter 35 was published in 1999.  Any chance of getting the missing chapters??  or atleast a conclusion?

Thanks!

Comment by DeeDee Clark on 05/09/05
Dear Crystal,

Another great story to add to your others. I really enjoyed this one. There was one point where the uncle was sounding off that could have been used to shut him up, and that was to tell him that his daughters were very instrumental in changing the boy into a girl.

Now please dear heart, finish the other two stories about the texas Gal and the movie actres.

DeeDee Clark

Comment by Jennifer on 04/27/05
Hi, I just love this story. I read it over and over all the time when I'm bored. I wish you would finish the story though instead of letting it hang fo years. Good luck in the future.

Comment by Lisa Wange on 04/10/05
I just wanted to sey thankyou for all the wonderful stories

Comment by chae on 11/29/04
I agree with what John said and would like to add that i hope you that she dose not give up writing to run the site

Comment by John on 11/15/04
I agree with you Angel. Sometimes it takes a long time to get a well written story finished. I've re-read this story twice now. I know that Crystal is constantly busy with the web-site so hew time is limited. I know that I can wait for her to finish it. I'm not a writer but I do understand where you are coming from. For everybody out there just keep patient she'll write some more in due time.

John

Comment by Angel O'Hare on 10/31/04
I have just finished reading 典exas-Gal once again. I truly do love this story and soon I will be re-reading 的 Can't Go Home Like This. One reading is not enough for these stories of yours, they are filled with surprises and great techniques an author can learn from.

Two years is not that long of a time for a great story to wait for an addition to it or even its completion. It has been two years since I have added anything to Queen of Harvest Moon.

An author cannot force a completion if the story is to remain of the high quality it has been written with. I differ in my opinion with Jennifer, the previous commenter. She claims that your site is filled with unfinished stories. Giggle, giggle.

Jennifer, these are works in progress. Some take longer than others to complete for various reasons. It took me over two years to finish A Life Ever Changing. I do not know if you are a writer or not, but your comment leads me to believe you are not an author. Try it! Giggle, giggle.

Anyway, any great story is a story worth waiting for. I have now read and re-read Texas Gal three times. I will be starting on re-reading ICGHLT for the fifth time I think. ICGHLT is one of my all time favorites in the TG-Fiction Genre. Re-reading Crystal's stories always kicks my creative juices back into high gear. Hopefully with this latest re-read I can finish several of my present works that are still in progress. Mostly I am hoping to finish Queen of Harvest Moon.

Huggles Crystal!
Angel O.

PS. I just wish you could reassemble your team that had helped you with Texas-Gal to finish this work of art.

Comment by Jennifer on 10/12/04
Hi, I enjoyed Texas Girl very much but when are you going to finish the story? I have been waiting for a couple years now. It seems like most writers for this web site never finish their stories. Too bad.

Comment by jill koch on 08/21/04
i love your storys. Keep up the go work.

Comment by John on 07/27/04
I finnaly finished all the chapter that you have on Texas Gal. It only took me a week of reading of 3-4 hours a day. This is definately the best story that I have ever read to date and I've read quite a few as of lately. Crystal has got to be one of the best writers out there cause of the detail that she uses in the story makes you feel like you are there for yourself. I only wish that you would finish the story instead of leaving it hang for as long as you have. I know that you probly have a life but please finish the story for every one.

Sincerely,
John

Comment by Briar on 07/22/04
Crystal dearest,

I DO so wish that you would add some more to both Texas Girl and I Can't Go Home Like This.   I have now read virtually everything on your site, and a lot of others that I found on your links page.  With such a wide range to compare your stories with, I still find them among the very best.  I know it is hard to complete stories when the characters seem to take on a life of their own and events run away with them, but it would realy be  worth the effort, I promise you!

Hugs,

Briar

Comment by Chris W on 06/24/04
Texas Gal "WoW" the story of all times the greatest story I have ever read written by a human. I say it that way so I don't get in trouble by the big guy! Crystal Please finish this story with the great way you write. Unlike some cheap copycat that tried to imatate you. I knowyou have a great web site and a life to live but some of us don't!! Sitting hear all broken-up worn out bodies with just enough brians left in our heads to boot the computer up and go on-line an hope for a better world than the one that grewes us up! Knowing that if we could relive our live our again we'd would ha d taken the chance to come out of the closet about our dressing and inner feelings. BUTT WE DIDN'T SO THE NEXT BEST THING IS YOUR STORIES THAT YOU POST SO!! Please complete your GREAT Story Texas Gal.
Thank You,
Christopher W  

Comment by Diane Castle on 06/21/04
Crystal,
  I have read (and re-read) all of "Texas Gal", and I so wish there were more.  I loved the plot development, and I loved the breadth of the saga.  Would Darla eventually stomp South-Core into the mud and force Alliance to ally with her?  Wouldn't Darla solve Mabel's problems with the textile division?  And hasn't Mabel planned all of Darla's business development so that someday Mabel will have an heir who can take over form her?  But what about Darla's personal life?  What about her 'little difference'?  What about those trips to France, which is not that far from Denmark?  Surely she deserves more happiness than just being CEO of Mabel's conglomerate.
  I understand the time commitments of a website this size, and I have caught rumors of far more complex commitments in your personal life.  Still, I wish that you could at least drop in some manner of wrap-up.  Famous authors such as the creator of Horatio Hornblower have at least left unfinished stories with an outline of the rest of the story.  Don't you have just a *little* something you could share with us poor fans?  I have finished "I Can't Go Home Like This" and I have the same.. oh dear, I suppose it is a whine.  :-)

Diane

Comment by Zip on 06/15/04
Is there any word as to when we will get to enjoy more of this great story.

I realize that it takes time to write stories, cause I started writing one and in the last year have finished the first paragraph! However, those who have the Gift of writing, should do it!

Zip

Comment by Alice Barry on 05/16/04
Only one comment. I was disappointed when it ended without resolution of Darla's situation. How about 1 chapter to bring all the loose ends together?

Comment by Sharon on 05/15/04
I found the stories about Darla interesting, once I started I stayed on line until finished reading all chapters.
Please continue, there were times I cried and times I laughed.
Just wished they were in paper back, I wouldn't mind passing them around.
Keep up the good work.

Comment by Francine on 04/10/04
Hi Crystal :)
Oh PLEASE continue your story!!!!!!
Hugs, Fran

Comment by MichelleA on 03/17/04
Crystal
  I have loved your stories since I first read one.   I should have made this comment sooner but I doubt that it would have changed anything since I had a late start reading.   I feel that your characterization of the ease with which Darla starts to attend the local church is out of character with the previous portrayal of the families church attendance.   This is especially true since it was before the ecominical movement.   This lack of justification continues when the mother arrives and she makes no comment on the church practices.   I'm sure that phone conversations would have been held but there is no explanation in the body of the story.   This is a miner nit of my own but otherwise the story is great. More. More. More.                Huggles MichelleA

Comment by Becky on 01/31/04
I really enjoy your story.  I was comical, serious, there was a great love for family members.  I even cried at times, when things were sad. Laughed when it was comical.  Again, I really enjoyed this story.  I hope that you can continue it in the near future.
I also have the same comments about "I Can't Go Home Like This."
Keep up the good work.

Comment by Cleo on 10/02/03
I was sickened when I started reading the very poor addition to your wonderful Texas Gal, called Dallas Doll. This author doesn't have one tenth of your talent and is outright stealing the story that you had to have spent hundreds of hours on.
I'm not sure that I understand why you allowed this on your website.
Looking forward to more of your wonderful Texas Gal!!!!

Comment by Irishderry on 09/28/03
Months ago I found the first 15 chapters Of Texas Gal on the Fictionmania website I think. And what could I say about this story so far? Excellent and left me hungry for more.

And where was the rest of the story by C. Sprite? I couldn't find any reference to Texas Gal or C. Sprite.  And then Dallas Doll by Dee Eon was published. And I thought that it was pretty good also.
While still searching for more stories of Texas Gal, I decided to read the comments about Dallas Doll for some hints of what I could find about C. Sprite and Texas Gal.

BOY!!, was I embarrassed. C. Sprite was Crystal of Crystal's StorySite. But what was all the impassioned controversy about concerning Dee Eon's Dallas Doll?
So I downloaded chapters 16 through 35 and I read them ALL. And what can I say about this story?

I laughed, I cried, I smiled and giggled. I was morose, I was depressed, I was elated and enlightened. (Just some of my feelings.)
And how were you able to incorporate my life into your story?

By reading your story and the comments about it and Dallas Doll, I realized that I was not alone. People don't write these types of comments unless the story plucks and stirs the heart, mind and emotions of themselves. And I found I was one of them!!

I was the quiet one, the loner. The egghead and the rebel. The unnoticed one. And I found I was one of you!! I don't feel as alone anymore.

So where is the rest of Texas Gal?  We all need Darla Anne to continue her adventures. To be strong and determined. To be bold and daring. To be young and innocent. To be sweet and loving.

And now I know why there was such an impassioned controversy about how Dee Eon's Dallas Doll was treating our Darla Anne. Yes! Darla Anne is ours, and we are her in our core.

Now remember, Dee has permission to continue / expand Darla Anne's story.

I think that there are two reasons why people are upset.
One, the change of perspective. We now see Darla as others perceive her, not how or who she actually is.
Two, we will allow NO ONE to hurt Darla.

And Dee has said on numerous times that she would not hurt Darla. And I believe her. She loves her as much as we all do. We just have to give her a chance and see how the story develops and how Darla is treated.

So Crystal we need you to continue with Texas Gal and Darla Anne's remarkable life, who we all love and aspire to be.

And Dee, I for one will continue to look for and read about Darla.

Comment by Briar on 09/24/03
Dearest Crystal,

I realise that you must be very busy, what with running the Storysite and everything.  So it is understandable you dont have a lot of time to continue your too, wonderful serials, Texas Gal and I Cant go Home Like This.  

Now someone has had the temerity to attempt to fill the gap with a Texas Gal Spoof.   It is not NEARLY as good as the original, and is rather annoying.  If you would be able to find time to write the occasional chapter, I am sure folks would not do things like this.

Please ?  Pretty please, with cream and strawberries ?

In frustration I just re-read both for the third time.  Both stories can stand up to that.  They really are, very good.

Love& Hugs,

Briar

Comment by Nicole on 09/21/03
Poor Darla Ann has been waiting almost a year, now, for replys to her offers on the plants. Please, take her (and us) off the hook. This is, by far, the best story on your site, and almost the only reason I keep coming bck. PLEASE, LET US HAVE SOME MORE.--Nicole

Comment by Dave on 09/20/03
 Dear Sweet Crystal
 It has been almost a year since you last updated Texas Gal and ICGHLT  and I was wondering if you had gotten a case of writers block . By the Goddess I hope not you write so beautifully that the stories that come from you I find are the best to bring me out of my depression. I have missed your updates and hope that you will soon be able to post more of you  wonderful stories on the site very soon. Your writing is a needed fix for some of us and we do need that fix so as to keep you writers going.
                    Please pretty please put something out there for us loyal fans we need you  to feed us with your love .
               Lotsa of Love   Dave

Comment by JAKE on 09/09/03
PLEASE, PRETTY PLEASE, PRETTY,PRETTY  PLEASE DO NOT STOP WRITING TEXAS GAL. IT IS WONDERFUL READING AND AM LOOKING FORWARD TO CHAPTER 36  AND MUCH MORE.............

Comment by Brandie on 07/30/03
Crystal, you are really wonderful and I have enjoyed your stories so very much.  Please, please write some more of Texas Gal, and I can't go home like this.  It has been so long and I really am still kind of waiting on the edge of the story line for completion. Have heard on your web site from some of the other girls that you really slave away on your story site and are not getting much time to be your wonderful creative self.  thank you so much for that tom you are so nice.  If ever I can be of any slight help please contact me and let me know.
Huggggggs brandie

Comment by DeeDee Clark on 05/16/03
I really love TexasGal, and I wish you would add more chapters and soon. It makes darn good reading. Is she/he going to make the transition to became a girl?  I hope so.

You did remove my favorite story however.  I really liked the four boys over the fence and into the old mansion.  Why did you take it out? Are you going to add to it?(I hope)

Lve DeeDee Clark

Comment by Karen on 04/25/03
Why stop now? The stories are interesting and very well written. I'm looking forward for the rest of it!

Comment by ace on 04/11/03
I enjoyed the story and hope to see more soon

Comment by Nicole on 01/31/03
Too bad Darla isn't a real person. The International Paper cellouse plant in Natchez, Mississippi is closing down, 1200 jobs lost. PLEASE move Texas Gal up on your priority list.

Comment by Dave  Clydesdale on 01/29/03
Dear sweet Crystal you and your stoies have made life for me more bearable and worth living. I truly love your stories about Darla Anne and I only wish that you could write more about her and her exploits more often. I know that you are working very hard to write these wonderful stories and pray that you keep up all that good work. I can not wait to read what happens to Darla Anne and the rest of her family and Grandma. Take care cause we all care about you . Lotsa love Dave.

Comment by Nicole on 01/14/03
I keep waiting and waiting and waiting and checking your site two and three times a day, but still no more Darla. Please, please, PLEASE write some more. I can't wait to see how Darla handles the Truck stop, the roofing mill, and the startup of the abandoned plant. Please hurry, I can't hardly hold my water and I'm standing here knock-kneed--Nicole

Comment by Hannah Marie on 12/26/02

I am just astounded by this story. I am only up to chapter 15 and can't stop reading, and it is now almost 11 pm here in New York. This story is like a book you cannot put down captivating and intrigueing. I truley think this story should be published, I love it...Hannah

Comment by Barbara Lynn Terry on 12/20/02
Another fine chapter Crystal. I so enjoy reading about Darla Anne and her adventures into the business and college worlds and her vacations in France. Keep up the good work.

Barbara Lynn Terry

Comment by prince on 12/13/02
just love all your stories and can't wait until you add more chapters too Texasgal and i cant go home like this, keep up the excellent writing.

Comment by ewilde on 12/11/02
Thanks for the recent chapters of Texas Gal it was a nice treet to find it when I returned for the hospital following surgery.  Darla Ann's adventures brightened my day while recovering from my bypass.  Thanks again and keep up the good work.  You are an excelent writer.  I hope to see the next chapters of I can't go home like this soon.

Comment by Anonymous on 12/10/02
Crystal,

I am an anonymous fan of yours.  I've read all of your fiction, and also enjoy your chat logs and profile.

I am just writing to say that your writing has given me many, many hours of enjoyment, and that I am very appreciative.  I truly appreciate the hours and hours that you have spent creating your stories.

Thank you again ever so much,

Anonymous

Comment by Angel on 12/03/02
Your writing is as superb as ever and I await the next series of chapters as good things are worth waiting for.

It is so hard to acquire or luck into a great proof reader and editor. It seems most are doing multiple jobs and others are simply just average at best. One thing they do give us is whatever they can give at the time. We writers would be lost without them!

I would like to take this time to thank all the proof readers and editors out there, their experience, skill and time they have devoted to us writers is invaluable. Most do it for free! That in itself is worthy of thanks and praise from all of us writers and the readers as well.

If anyone knows of a quality proof reader/editor or if you are one please contact me via my e-mail. Erin Halfelvin from the "BigCloset" has given some of her valuable and hard to find free time to proof and edit my stories. She just does not have enough free time to give. Her site has taken off big time and now she is swamped.

If you would like to read some of my work just e-mail me and I will send you the links.
Thank You and Thank You C-Sprite!
Angel


Comment by Jill on 12/02/02
Thanks for the new chapters.  Darla Anne is still captivating.

I just finished reading a book on writing fiction.  The book left me feeling very inadequate, until I noticed a number of typos and double words.  Things like 'aid' for 'said'.  Now I think I can actually be a writer... they're human.

In a work of this size, typos are very understandable.  They didn't dilute the entertainment value..

Love to you.

Jill

Comment by Lady Cynthia on 11/27/02
I lost track of the timeline during the intermission break.  Going back to the first chapter, it was 1966 and Mary was 13 and the soon to be "Darla" was 10.  In the lastest chapter, Mary is now 18.  That would mean five years have past and it is 1971 in the latest chapters.  Darla would now be 15.

It has seemed to me that the family does seem to be so isolated from the events around them.  And that there does not seem to be much "cultural" setting to the stories (i.e., events of the day).  The stories could be happening anytime in the past 50 years.

I do love the characters, Crystal, you have a wonderful flare to make them three dimensional.  Please keep up the good work and publish more chapters soon.

Comment by Nora-Adrienne on 11/27/02
Hi Crystal.
I am so glad that you have found the time to add more chapters to this storyline.. I have a question that might help it further. Can you find out if T-1 lines were available to corporations in the time frame this story runs in ?  Granted there was no internet perse but having each plant install a T-1 and then hooking up the mini computers would have worked.. Even back in the early 70's colleges were doing it.

Hugs
Nora

Comment by Cai on 11/27/02
Crystal,  Thank you for a wonderous Thanksgiving Treat.  I had troubles getting into the first part, then one day by chance I read another part, 5, I think.  From that point on I have been hooked.  I await each installment with baited anticipation.
Thank you for your continuous efforts of excellent storytelling,  it is fresh, crisp and a downright good read.
I hope you have a good Holiday Season this year, I will, plus I will be waiting for the next round to appear.

Comment by Barbara Lynn on 11/25/02
Crystal, I will never get tired of reading the adventures of Darla Anne. This new installment, is equally as good as the others. I am so waiting for the rest of the story.

Barb

Comment by Ed on 11/22/02
Crystal, As usual your writing ability stands out for me. I wait patiently for each chapter. I don't me to sound negative and I am sure that Teddy Sue did a terrific job. I suspect however that she was under some time constraints. If you or she rereads chapter 31 you will find some words that were ment to be deleted. I am sure when that is done, it will be another perfect chapter as the other are. I mean this as a constuctive critcism and in no way a sour grape. Your friend, Ed Brown

Comment by Jenna Hitch on 11/22/02
I知 so glad to see another chapter posted in this saga. It has been awhile since we got to spend some time with DD so it was nice to hear from her again. The close sense of family in these stories I think is what I find the most enjoyable. I知 a sucker for the sweet and sentimental stories posted here and this series is one of the best in giving you a warm happy feeling. Keep up the great work Crystal and I値l keep reading.

Jenna

Comment by Briar on 11/22/02
Crystal, I was so happy this morning to find a nice surprise in  "what's new" waiting for me - another chapter of Texas Girl from your good self !

I am sooo glad you are finding time to write again, now that all the hassle with the storysite has been sorted !

I agree with the previous comment BTW, you do write good stuff.

Can I ask, do some of the older stories get removed from the storysite?  I wanted to re-read one the other night and it was vanished, or at least, I couldnt find it, using the search engines...

Love,

Briar

Comment by hanna on 10/04/02
love your story, cant wait until you send more chapters too this very good story. Your a very good writer.

Comment by Mary Anne on 09/22/02
The story is good but when you let your readers hang too long for the ending. Instead you cut the chapters in 1/2 or 1/3's to make more chapters than necessary and also waste time on graphics which will never download in anyones files to read later. It is just too bad you have to wait months for another drawn out chapter.

Comment by jillmi on 07/14/02
Amazing... simply amazing.

You have created some great characters.  It would be nice to see this made into a movie.  Take out the TG subplot and scrub up the bondage scenes and you would have a modern-day Little Women.  I'd love to see Angelica Huston as Grandma and Julia Roberts as Auntie.

One small edit.  You wrote that the secretary used 'the photocopier'.  I think it would be more accurately stated in 1968 as 'the Xerox'.  You might also have DD display her prescient knowledge by predicting the huge amounts of paper companies will use due to "the Xerox".

You have also indicated that DD noticed the toxic?? waste generated by the paper process.  Her Auntie and Grandma are both very aware of the environment.  You might have DD make special efforts to make her plants more Earth-friendly.

As a business person who has cut a few 'deals'... I think you have captured the essence of what is involved.  DD certainly doesn't stand for due diligence.  Perhaps she is more properly known as DL around the water coolers... Damned Lucky.

I think you have been right to have the college boys almost totally ignore her.  Most college boys would find her to be too intimidating...  despite her younger age.  I'm surprised none of the younger foremen have made an attempt.

Thank you also for (mostly) keeping the Dan Ratherisms out of this.  Just becasue she's a Texas gal doesn't mean she has to talk like her mouth is full of cotton.

You might have her deal with some adversity.  When is she going to have to respond to her first workplace lawsuit?  When is the press going to interview her and completely turn her words around to suit their pre-written story?  When are one of her hand-picked MEN (doesn't her company have any women executives?) going to develop a cocaine habit and embezzle a few hundred thousand dollars?  When are one of the men going to react horribly to working for a 14 year old girl?

This is all happening in the 60's.  How is it this family is so removed from everything going on around them?  When will Kevin get killed in Vietnam?  Why aren't protesters actively disturbing the campuses?  Where are the drugs?  Are these girls so self absorbed that none of them has developed a social conscience?  If there father was alive, he sounds like someone with strong enough ethics to be repulsed by LBJ and Nixon.  I understand the family didn't watch TV... but what about music?  Did she know about the Beatle's, the Stones, Dylan, etc.?  Texas Gals love beauty pageants.  Aren't any of the 'Bliss Sisters' going to take part?  Why haven't they got involved with other horse people?  In my experience, the more horsey the girl, the hornier the girl.  When will one of these Gals get pregnant?

Thank you very much for your efforts.  I wouldn't be at all surprised to see Darla become known outside this site... Horatio Alger lives!

How can you stand the rest of us hack writers cluttering up your site?

Comment by ewilde on 07/01/02
Thank you for the lastest parts of Texas Gal.  I reread the entire story before reading the lastest parts.  Rereadint this well written story brightened my weekend as I reread it during a camping trip and helped me relax and enjoy the green mountain campground.  Keep up the execelent work.  

PS I can hardly wait for the next parts of I can't go home like this.

Thanks Again for sharing your talent with us your loyal readers.

Comment by louise1968 on 06/26/02
what a brilliiant story so far,i cant wait now until you write the rest of this wonderful serial

Comment by Nomad on 06/26/02
I was ecstatic to see 4 new chapters of this story appear and used it as an excuse to re-read it entirely. DD personal and business successes are captivating. But, pessimist that I am, I'm waiting and dreading for the other shoe to drop.

Have you considered having DD make a cameo appearance in ICGHLT? DD's family owns large areas in Texas which could be used as a location for a movie, giving Crystal Ramsey and DD an opportunity and reason to meet. And condsidering their age differences, maybe DD would want to adopt Crystal as *her* granddaughter.

I believe someone on the cyber-board said that the story lost it's TG 'bite', but most of the 'bite' is a TG person's initial denial of their own nature. After they accept themselves, wouldn't a TG person desire to appear and be accepted in all ways possible as their true gender? With your stories, Crystal, I forget that the main character is anything other than female except for occasional and painful reminders.

In any case, DD's story still has a TG bite as her personal and professional lifes are extremely vulnerable to the risk of exposure, especially as she develops enemies in both areas. A person as caring as DD would also fear that her exposure could ruin the livelihood of the people who work with and for her.

Thank you, Crystal, not only for this story, but this wonderful site.

- Nomad

Comment by Pervette on 06/26/02
Is there anything Darla *can't* do??  I can't wait for the point
where she changes her name to Martha Stewart....  :-)

Pervy

Comment by J.Eddy on 06/26/02
What a wonderful story.  These new chapters to Texas Gal are a welcome addition and the adoption scene brought a smile.  I have also enjoyed the bondage scenes in past episodes and thought their inclusion worked well with the story line.  I hope Gina will be making another appearance soon.  Keep up the good works.  

Comment by Joanne Foxcourt on 06/25/02
Tap, tap... Tap, tap... Okay, like, I'm already impatient... :o)

Some stories just catch you in. Texas Gal, I can't Go Home Like This, The "Saga" of Tuck, and several others just captivate you. You can't help but like the characters. I've enjoyed this story since the first time I started reading it ages ago. I just love Darla and would give my left arm to be her. So, please, pretty please, and with sugar and all that on top, don't make us wait for so long this time!

Comment by Jenna Hitch on 06/24/02
I discovered Texas Gal when I read the posts made to the cyberboard a few days ago about it and was hooked. I read the first 18 chapters that day and the rest the next day. Crystal it痴 your fault I知 now sleep deprived. In the last 48 hours I got about six hours of sleep but it was well worth it! This story succeeds on so many levels it has become one of my all time favorites. As someone who lives in Texas I have to say you captured the feel of Texas in the late sixties perfectly. Great Job!!!

Jenna

Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 06/24/02
This comment is not about the writer's mastery of her craft, which is excellent; it is just about my personal preference.  I just read chapter 8.  Why the bondage stuff?  How can anyone who loves a person do that to him or her, and how can anyone LIKE that?  Plus, what if something had happened to Karen after she told the cook Darla had left?  What if Darla had to go to the bathroom?  How would she have liked it if she had to be bound in her urine or excrement?  What if someone had found her who didn't know about soaking the gag before expelling it from her mouth?  The whole chapter gave me the creepy crawlies!  I am downloading the chapters as I read them so that I will have the whole thing; I'm still thrilled with the overall story, however, I will leave out chapter 8.  

Comment by Tigger on 06/24/02
every once in a while, a story or series comes down the track that changes how we think about what we do here, about the goals and parameters of our craft.

I reread texas gal yesterday, start to finish, and by the time I was into part 6, I had forgotten that it was 'TG', at least until Crystal o-so-sweetly slipped in one of her 'little secret' reminders somewhere in each section.

I found the experience to be like watching a very good 'ahem' 'day-time drama' (yeah, I know, soap-opera, and I can spell 'young and the restless' and 'as the world turns' with the best of them and I use Susan Lucci's character to motivate Aunt Jane when she's first breaking in a new student). However, Texas Gal is just as engrossing, just as addictive.

Good story telling is good story telling.  The detail with which Crystal embues this story, as DD grows and becomes more and more her own woman is incredible.  This is more than just 'good' storytelling this is . . .well. . transcendent, a new standard in the long-story-serial sub-genre. The plot is compelling, the human interactions are believeable and ring true on a variety of levels and it's just plain fun.

oh yeah, and I think I rememnber that the main character? Darla Anne? It sticks in my mind that she used to be David Alexander.  Not that it has much bearing on the story.  It just *is*.

take a curtsy, Crystal.

Author!! ::phwweet phweet:: ::stomp stomp!::  Author, AUUUUThor!!

warm furry hugs

tigger


Comment by Jezzi Belle Stewart on 06/24/02
They say the devil is in the details; in this case it's the angels.  Up till the present, I had avoided reading Texas Gal, being intimidated by the length and by the erratic spacing of the episodes.  However, now I'm hooked and am allowing two episodes a day into my schedule.  I'm an 8th grade teacher and have been thinking that Texas Gal could be a wonderful teaching tool.  So far - I'm only on chapter 6 - I'm convinced that Darla Anne has to have some of Martha Stewart in her and that home economics could be "taught"; If Texas Gal were a TV series, I could see at the end of each episode the recipe DD used and some household tips displayed.  Or the viewer could be directed to DD's website where specifics could be obtained.  From comments I've read, I believe economics and business administration, science, and math could be "taught" also from the material in further chapters.  On top of everything else, Darla is a wonderful role model for young women (and, from my point of view anyway, young boys :-)  She is able to maintain her femininity and yet still compete with the boys in the real world.  It seems as if the TG element is rapidly fading into the background, but I expect it will bounce back in future episodes.  
   On a personal note, The way David and Darla transition is exactly the way Bob and I transition, except that when Bob becomes me, he goes to a mental recreation room in our mind where he settles in to a lounge chair with a beer in one hand and a remote for the TV in the other; when I become Bob, I go to a mental beauty spa for a relaxing period of being pampered.  I can't see either Darla or David being "half and half" - David wearing panties under his slacks, for example - which is the way it is with Bob and I.  I have to work with Bob's 5'11" 225lb, size 12 footed body, so this "attitude adjustment" has certainly helped in others accepting me as a woman or T-girl; looks are certainly NOT everything!  On the other hand it has certainly helped in others not seeing Bob as effeminate or gay.  Almost everyone knows we share the body, and  so far, no problem.  
On a final (for now) note, David is lucky to have discovered Darla so young; Bob had to wait until the second half-century to discover me!  

Comment by chrisl on 06/23/02
Dear Crystal,
            Wow what an exciting ride. I just spotted your update and devoured the two new chapters as fast as I could without missing a word. It is great to catch up on how our old friends are doing. I think I will go back to the beginning and enjoy the whole story again just for the pleasure it always gives me. :)
Hopefully you are planning to take your own relaxing summer holiday soon (the south of France?). Anyone watching this site knows you obviously work too hard.
                       Take care and thank you, Love Chrisl.  
   

Comment by Mary Anne on 06/21/02
Hi Crystal,
    I would like to thank you for the lovely story that you have written so far. I enjoyed it very much. So when is the next chapter coming out. I hate it when stories hang for a very long time. I have your original 7 chapters, so why did you split them up to make 23 chapters?
    I hope you don't let your readers hang for too long. So far their are only a handfull of writers at this site who can write like you can. So keep up the great work.
    Also, is this in book or pamphlet form for sale?
    Sincerely, Mary Anne

Comment by Commodore Zed on 06/08/02
I enjoy your story for the most part, how ever, the mother's lack of consern for David, and primaraly focusing on his female side was, I believe, crule, and not beleivable

Comment by Crystal on 05/23/02
I recently modified the story parts to conform with the new 130 K rule that I've adopted (WebTV visitors cannot download stories greater than 130 k). In uploading the new story parts, parts 22 and 23 were corrupted. I've reloaded them and they're okay now.

Comment by Chae on 05/23/02
I hate to tell you this but when you went through and redid the story you seemed to have lost part of it between chap. 22 and 23 the reason that i know this is that i was rereading and noticed that the story took a big jump when i went from 22 to 23, but I still hope to see more of the story soon

Comment by Denise on 05/16/02
Sweet dear C Sprite when can we see more of Texas Gal story it holds me so close that when we have to wait for a long time we get very worried that you may forget us poor souls. The story is very good and it holds you attention so hard that it is hard to stop reading but when you get to the end of the chapter and there is no more to read well it is almost heart stopping. Please continue with the good work . But please please sent us some more story pretty please.

Comment by Ken on 04/21/02
Crystal,

This is just another voice from the net.  Another complement on the  two series you have underway... TEXAS GAL and I CAN'T GO HOME.  As  with all of the other comments listed, I can only ask for your continued progress on both stories.  

I understand the situation of your having to care for your mother and the lunacy of reworking your site, but please let your next installments come sooner rather than later.  These two stories without a doubt are the most enjoyable I have read.  Don't let the nitpickers spoil the flow of these tales.  The only discord which seemed forced in either story were the two episodes in TEXAS GAL where she was "roped" into some bondage situations.  It felt forced and not part of the comfortable flow of events.

Thank you very much for many enjoyable hours of reading in the past and I certainly hope into the near future.

Comment by Paul N Liming on 03/16/02
I like the story but there one thing that is missing is chapter 12 where is it. In the begaining of the story sound like me when I was a little but I do dress up like a female some time now

Comment by Nick on 03/03/02
I have just finished #7 of Texas Gal, and LOVE IT!
Gwoff edited a story of mine (yet unfinished) and compared it to Texas Gal, which caused me to read it. Our hero(wine)s are close, and I'm not sure but what your story is better.
Please, please, PLEASE hurry with #8! I can't wait to see if Darla Anne builds a truck stop, what with all her trucks running back and forth.--Nick

Comment by Emma on 11/11/01
A great story that I love reading time and again. Very well researched and very strongly written. Thanks for bringing the Bliss Sisters to us.

Comment by Lester Lee on 09/20/01
Dear Crystal,

Part 7, on August 6th.  What a wonderful birthday present!  Thank you!!!

Now, if I had only been watching your site better, I would have noticed it on August 6th and not yesterday!  Oh well, may be next year!

Once again, I thoroughly enjoyed one(Darla) of my two favorite(Crystal) characters that you have created.  Like many of your other readers, I share in their enjoyment of the way you "bring to life," your characters.  They are so vivid to me, that I feel like I have actually met them.  Considering that I am a visually oriented person and not verbally oriented, I think it says a lot about your writing skills.

I can hardly wait to read("see") what "DD" does in your next installment!

Kind regards and please keep on writing!

Lester Lee

Comment by Jade Ace on 09/12/01
I just finished rereading Texas Gal 1 - 7.  It is refreshing to find a read that reflects research on the technical background to help make the characters and the story tie together.  However, I feel that you need to feel free, within the universe of your novel, to slip outside of historical accuracy to have a bit of room for your characters to make progress with the eco and labor themes.

Comment by Anonymous on 09/06/01
Crystal:

I have loved and followed your Texas Gal story sinse before StorySite existed.  Please continue.

Here are some potential problems you could elect to throw in Darla's path which might make her life even more interesting.

Darla works for AmeriMoore, while I don't remember any mention of her getting a paycheck for her efforts.  With all the press attention, don't you think the IRS (the income tax folks) would find that more than a little suspicious.  She has recieved quite a number of non-monitary benifits from her "Grand Mother" aka "her employeer".  Everything from huge gifts of clothing, free annual trips to France,
the list goes on and on.  I cannot see the tax man not becomming interested eventually.  Watching Darla and Mabel deal with the tax man might be fun.

Darla, operating for Amerimoore has now purchased a number of companies.  This is an activity the SEC (Securities and Exchange Commission) very much likes to stick their noses in.  Now we can assume for the sake of the story that none of the companies she purchased was publically traded (privately owned, no stock), but Amerimoore is supposed to be a big public company.  But I believe Purchases of small companies by larger "piblic" companies is watched by the SEC, if only for anti-trust purposes.  An inquisative SEC investigator might spice up Darla's life a little.

Darla has not yet faced any significant physical danger.  I mean no industrial accident, no attack or stalking by a disgruntled or crazy ex-employee, not even a car accident as a passenger.  She needs to find out how she will react in those situations.  Imagine an accident at one of her plants in which she escapes with some injury, but one of her workers is killed, maybe even in the act of saving her life.  That would be tough for an "adult" to handle,  Darla needs to face this kind of situation to grow and mature.

Corporate Officers and Company Presidents make policy.  A situation where Darla must make a new policy for how the companies will treat transgendered individuals could make life interesting for Darla.  Having to deal publically with an issue that close to home would be bound to have her examining her own situation.

Oh well, I hope these ideas capture and motivate your creative spirit to continue "Texas Gal".

Thanks for everything

Anonymous


Comment by chae on 08/21/01
As I have said before this is a very good story and I hope to see part eight soon,

Comment by chae on 08/21/01
as before this is a very good story and i hope to see part eight soon,

Comment by debbie cybill on 08/08/01
DD, everyone's favourite Texas Gal, is at it again in part seven of this saga.  If she goes on acquiring companies at this rate she will be halued up before the Monopolies Commission before the end of the next segment.  

The one trouble with a story spread out over so many months as this one is that one tends to forget earlier matters.  I can remember perfectly well the steps that led to DD becoming such a great business woman, but not the steps that led to her becoming a woman in the first place, and this seventh episode does no more than hint that she has a boy's secret under her skirts.

Crystal has created a wonderful character in DD and provided her with a great entourage of supporting characters too.  Her story is believable and engrossing.

Comment by Nellie D on 08/07/01
An excellent story. All seven parts of it. Oh,so eager for part eight to make its appearance.

Comment by ryan koch on 07/24/01
i love your story. are come out with part 7 in next 2 week

Comment by ed on 07/19/01
ooh wee all right and other Texas hollers.  Where's part seven allready, I can't wait. Thanks C.

Comment by MW on 05/30/01
Hi,
I enjoyed this story very much, since I found the next parts.
A very good non stop read.
I hope for much more.

Comment by Ashwin on 05/25/01
NO matter what, you have gripped the mind of your readers really well. Keep up the good work and let us have more amd more writings from you. Texas Girl is all great guns blazing away in a true texan manner. As Oliver Twist said to Fagin "Please Crystal, Let us have some more."

Comment by Mary Anne on 05/21/01
Hi, I have enjoyed this story very much. I hope you will continue with the story very soon.

Comment by chae on 04/11/01
Normaly I do not make comments on what i read to the writers, but I read some of the one that have been post to you and other writers that I like and decided that if I did not then all you had to go on was theirs, so here it is.
I have read both Texas Gal and I can't go home like this, and I enjoyed both of them. I hope that you continue to write them and please don't change the way you have the young girls acting. The only thing that I have a hard time understanding is that in Texas Gal Darla never seems to make any friends and keep them other then her sisters that is. But then maybe she has but you just decided not to write about them which is fine since like I siad before I really do enjoy reading her story and hope to read more soon. Please keep them coming

Comment by Jamie Elizabeth Burgess on 04/08/01
It has been some time since I read the first 5 installments of "Texas Gal" and was somewhat pleasantly surprised #6 and by the de-emphasis on clothes/appearance and the new emphasis on the business/society.  Darla seemingly does "give a damn" especially if money can be made.  I'm having to re-read the first installments looking for signs that she isn't totally pre-occupied with self.  While her character seems overly sweet I have met exceptional individuals with some of Darla's characteristics.  In the first installment she was playing Monopoly with a capitalist's strategy that irked her sisters and led to the gender crossing.  I have forgotten whether she had surgery and so am re-reading to see if the clues to her psyche were there in the beginning.  Thanks, Crystal for lots of work on the behalf of others.  My personal issues are to use the TG phenomena for the enhancement of society and steer away from the negatives.

Comment by Jennifer on 03/21/01
Crystal,

Loved your latest episode, but we have drifted so far from the problems of a TG to the problems of youth with age.  But a beautiful story...

One techincal nit.  At the computer center, the guy said that computers were doing all sorts of things like spreadsheets.  Um, not in '68.  I was there.  I had access to a 1401 then.

Bob Frankston created spreadsheets (visicalc) much later.  I know Bob and still see him on occations.  I did a spreadsheet type process on a mainframe in the mid-70s.  20-20 was the mainframe spreadsheet program and it came around in the mid to late 80s.

Otherwise your depiction of computing at that time was good....


Comment by Anonymous on 03/20/01
The only problem I had with installment 6 was the by now overly familiar cliffhanger ending.  I'm not complaining, I'm just trying to make an observation without making this comment a spoiler for the story.  The story line is great and true to the original ( installments 1 - 5 ).  I find this rather suprising given almost a year passed between installments 5 and 6.  The story line and characterizations did not appear to suffer from the delay at all.

In a nutshell, I would score this as another success.  Well done.

I'll seriously try to give you a few months before I start begging, pleading and whining for my next Bliss sisters fix.  There is no other story on the net which grabs and holds my attention like Texas Gal.  Your "I Can't Go Home Like This" is a close second in my opinion.  Both are great, but Texas Gal just somehow appeals to me more.  Like I said, I'll try to have patience and hold out a while before pestering you for the next installment.  Please have patience with me, I'm very seriously hooked on the continuing adventures of Darla and the rest of the Bliss Sisters.

Thank you so much for both stories and for Story Site itself.  You have done so very much for so many, thanks just does not seem enough.

Anonymous

Comment by geoff on 03/20/01
Well I guess I'm not going to be too popular here.  First let me say I think your treatment and writing is excellent and the characters well drawn.  I like your other stuff, but this...

What amazes me is that Darla hasn't become a victim of that other great Texas legend - the chainsaw massacre!  She is such a revolting little s**t.  

She reminds me of a young man I once interviewed for an undergraduate apprenticeship.  The personnel officer who shared the interview with me (I was asking the 'techie' questions) was of the opinion that if we'd employed him we'd have had a strike on our hands the first time he went on the shop floor!  Down to earth fitters etc don't take young upstarts too well, and have their own subtle and sometimes not so subtle ways of bringing them down to earth.  Darla wouldn't survive 5 minutes in the real world.

I would suggest in the real world Darla would be given a pretty hard time - especially as the bosses favourite.  Somehow she manages to be both arrogant and patronising to everybody she meets, no matter how senior or able.

I guess the fact that I read your story and allowed the heroine to wind me up so much is a credit to your characterisation.  Please, please just let her fall flat on her sweet little arse and learn just a little humility.

In a spirit of honest appraisal

Geoff

Comment by Anonymous on 03/08/01
Crystal:

Please don't let the Bliss Sisters die of neglect.  It has been so
very long sinse your last installment, I'm really getting worried.
I have enjoyed reading and re-reading parts 1-5 of Texas Gal at least
a few dozen times by now.  It long ago became my all time favorite.  Please continue the story soon.

You are among the few authors on the web who write "people" stories.
It does not matter what subject or category, as long as the people in
the story are believable, the story is believable.  This allows you to
take the reader anywhere you want them to go.  With Texas Gal, your
imagination has taken us on a truly wonderful ride.

I am a well and truly hooked fan of you and your characters.  If there
was anything I could do to motivate you to continue Texas Gal, I would
do in in a heart beat.  As I said a while ago on your CyberBoard, next
month will mark one year sinse the last time you breathed new life
into the Bliss Sisters.  Their fans and your fans have been holding
our collective breaths ever sinse.

So please "Great Mistress of the Written Word" continue to enrich
our sorry mundane lives by continuing Texas Gal.....

Comment by Francesca Barrie on 02/14/01
What can I say? The previous postings seem to have said it all.A wonderful story, well written, that kept me interested. I was so disappointed to be left high and dry and do hope you continue the story soon.I suppose we all identify with Darla Anne but we also know all the other carachters too.Whilst the TGism is an integral part of the story,and probably why we are all here,the rest of the story line is so plausible and so ably done.Thank you for the pleasure you have given me.More please,pretty please!

Hugs, Francesca

Comment by Diane Sutton on 01/21/01
I greatly enjoyed the continuing adventures of Darla Anne in Texas Gal.  I sincerely hope you will find the time to add to this story as it has fancinated me to no end.  I know that as a writer you have other things that take up your time and that you may also get tired of writing about one subject even though keeps the interest of those who read it.  I have read some of the other stories you have writen and will continue to read whatever you post on this site.  As always when I read one of the adventures of your characters I relate to them in one way or another, this only heightens the interest in each and every one of you writings.  You have such a gift for this type of story that it retains enough of fiction and yet has also enough within its storyline to give the impression that some of it could indeed be nonfiction.  I just love the way you intergrate the charactors within each story line and hope that you find the time to continue with your facinating hobby which just might someday turn you into a major author with a nationaly know publisher.  You have a talent that I am sure anyone who should either be told of you or just happen to find your site that they will totally enjoy the time it takes to read any of your writings.  If you should ever publish in book form I would be most happy if you would end me an e-mail so that I cuold purchase it.
Sincerely Yours
Diane Sutton

Comment by Juli on 01/17/01
rarely have I enjoyed a story as much as yours. I note that there aren't very many comments and perhaps it is because many who have read your stories are concerned, as I have been, and reluctant to post comments in fear that they might receive e-mail which might be difficult to explain to their family. I know that I have wanted to comment but in the past have done so on other sites and received e-mail ( auto response systems ) which if I hadn't caught them before my wife did I would have had to reveal a part of me to her which I'm sure she would neither accept or understand and which could destroy my family.

Your story structure and nuances are excellant and I look forward to more, not finishing, but continuing. Both Crystal and Darla are the epitome of what many would like to be but for a variety of reasons can't except vicariously. Please keep on with what you have begun.

Comment by K R on 01/01/01
I really like Texas Gal - somebody barely a teenager (if that) with more smarts than someone with an MBA. AND, she doesn't toot her own horn. May we please be gifted with installment #6, so we find out what Grandma thinks of Darla's purchase of the paper plant? Not that she'd be bothered too much by it- it's obvious she trusts her with almost anything. Still, I wonder how she'll react to committing that much of available funds. *Please* supply more. If necessary, take a day off the site updates once a week to make room to write. (Maybe Sunday? It's reckoned a day of rest by most people).

Thanks very much for your writings and your site.

Comment by Debbie Cybill on 12/21/00
I rarely bownload a multipart story until it is completed, but Cryssstal's stories are an exception, since they are so well crafted and so enjoyable to read.  I wonder how she finds time to write as well as to manage her website.  Keep it up, gal.

Comment by Coyote M Bishop on 12/01/00
Crystal Sprite shows her talent in the two stories 'Texas Gal' and 'I Can't Go Home Like This'.  And the best part is that neither of them are complete.  I am looking forward to their continuation.  Crystal knows how to write a positive adventure, where the subject grows with the story.  In this, when we identify with her protagonist, we feel good about ourselves.  If she has a fan club, I want to join.

--CMB

Comment by Sandra Michelle on 11/24/00
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