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The Three Year Itch
by Anne Browning

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Comment by Ger Croonen on 10/13/10
Beste Anne,

Ik heb genoten van jouw verhalen en hoop dat je je nog verder ontwikkelt in dit genre. Daarnaast ben ik het er over eens dat testosteron een chemische stof is die voor veel stress en ellende zorgt. Het zal er vast ook zijn om te overleven maar ik prefereer toch een werkelijkheid zonder die stof.
Vanuit een transgender achtergrond zijn jouw verhalen dromen die uitkomen.

Heel veel succes gewenst met nieuwe verhalen.

Ger


Comment by Silvia. on 09/25/10
Very,very bad story!
Silvia.

Comment by julie j on 03/18/05
this again is my second read of this story agin it could do with more padding out or cornel getting his revenge on his wife and boss a devious set up more expansion with ideas please otherwise agreat story well worth reading

Comment by Michelle on 07/01/04
LOVED IT!!!!

Comment by julie on 02/21/04
stories ofenforced feminisation are really great i often dream about this myself wonderfull story a bit of bondage would have made it better and a bit more punishment from his wife but i cannot get over the set up it was brilliantly planned and executed more please wonderfull

Comment by SassySue on 12/21/01

I love stories of forced feminization with hormones and I agree with Diane Sutton that this plot was well laid out and the story well told. It should appeal to all who like this genre.

However, I am not as forgiving as Diane is with respect to the errors. This story could certainly have used another proofreading before it was posted.  It almost read like a first draft. The continuality errors were particularly annoying.  The Frenchman was mostly called "Paul", but in a few cases he was referred to as "Michael", often right before or after he had been referred to as "Paul". Moreover, at points the text switched from single spacing to double spacing.  

I see this tale is copywriter 1999, so I hope that later efforts show more careful writing and editing.  This author shows a lot of talent, but needs just a little more discipline to be one of the exceptional ones.  I look forward to reading more of her (hopefully better-edited) stories.

SS



Comment by Diane Sutton on 08/20/01
I liked the way Cornel was turned into Nellie. I almost wish I were the subject matter. There may have been a few grammar mistakes but, I had little problem with them and it could have been just the way I was reading it.
I think the story is well thought out and very well composed with enough details to keep the reader from stopping anywhere along the storyline.
The subject matter is just the way I like it and I do so enjoy the forced feminization and use of hormones in a story. This story  has all those things and more. A very good read.

Diane



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